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Chapter 15: Killer or Lifesaver? Thump. Thump. My heart’s pounding really hard. I feel like another heart attack is imminent. Thump. Thump. If not for all the afternoon runs with Shizune last week, I might have keeled over already. I’m far from being in good shape, but at least I’m getting better e...

Oh boy, this is a long one... I'm going to comment as I read, so some comments might be redundant with what others have already written. Thanks for the comments. Unfortunately the forum logged me off after a while so I had to type everything again. First thought: "In a route going off Shizune'...

Chapter 14: Cup of Tea “Yay~!! Mock exam is OVER!! It’s CELEBRATION TIME~!!” The class bursts into laughter as my neighbor declares the obvious. Guess who will she celebrate with? [“Let’s go, Hicchan and Shicchan!”] Not as oblivious as Misha, I prefer using sign language in this situation. [Hey Mis...

Chapter 13: Stretching Instructions After that wonderful breakfast, Shizune and I enter our homeroom together. Misha has already arrived, and greets us with an analyzing stare before reverting to sign language. [“Hi Hicchan and Shicchan~”] I wonder if she’ll ever get tired of calling us by her self...

Chapter 12: Oatmeal Breakfast Dear Hisao, Thanks for helping me out in Student Council work. I trust the abilities of Aoi and Keiko to run a competitive Student Council next year. Sorry that it took me so long to think about our relationship. I said I wanna put it on hold until after the exams, and...

Chapter 11: Verbal Machine Gun We decide to sit down on a bench while waiting for the results. Shizune takes out a book to study. Misha tries to follow suit, but obviously she can’t concentrate as well as Shizune. I decide to talk to Inoue instead of studying. “So, you two are aiming for Journalism...

Chapter 10: Away in a Flash When we finally step out of the Business Faculty, my hands hurt so much that I need to keep massaging them. But when I see the smile of satisfaction on Shicchan’s face, I know it’s all worth it~! Today was the toughest translation session ever for me~~!! In Yamaku, teach...

Chapter 9: Amazing School This is the second time I travel by train with my two best friends. We got up before sunrise, boarded the train on time, and had Shizune-style breakfast in the train. Eager to take a break from studies, we decided to just chat in the train. The use of sign language, combin...

Chapter 8: Interrupt Her Nonsense I’m happy that lunch provided me with a much-needed distraction from my problems. At least I’m finally able to truly smile since the day Misha and I made that mistake. Lunch with Miki, Yukio, Haru, and Suzu was awesome. I enjoyed listening to their banters, and whe...

Chapter 7: Risking My Life Luckily I’ve brought myself lunch for today. I love fried food, but I wanna try something new today, so I cooked myself some vegetables instead. I’ve got to stay healthy. The past few days have been draining, and I didn’t get much sleep. Let’s eat before the food gets col...

Chapter 6: Two White Envelopes It’s getting really cold at this time of the year, yet I’m getting out of my dorm room this late in the evening. Picking up my coat, I lock my door and head towards the academic building, where I’m supposed to meet Misha. I called her in the evening, asking if I can t...

On the subject of the story itself, I personally believe that chapter one was unnecessary and undesirable. This is a story; we don't need to be told everything through exposition. The second chapter has a similar flaw: it involves a lot of Mutou dishing out a speech. Try lightening up, leaving a li...

The table of contents is interesting. Normally I'd say not to include something like that, as you don't want to give away what's happening and you also want to leave yourself room for the story to grow and change on you, but the very fact that you do give us some titles (not all) does also make for...

Chapter 5: A Different Vibe I rarely visit the sports field. It’s not so much because I rejected the Nurse’s orders to run with Emi, but more because I simply don’t like running. I feel a little better after talking to Misha. I’ve known her a little better now. If we join forces, we might be able t...

Chapter 4: Jerks Work. More work. This form goes into this stack. That pile is done. Alright. Let’s print them out. The candidates list, and the election form. Aoi. Keiko. These two seem to be the best candidates. But they’re still way too weak. If they get elected, I need to teach them a lesson be...