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by ShizuneFan2019
Thu Aug 29, 2019 2:11 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Maturity - Shizune Epilogue (A continuation of After Graduation) (Completed 12 Sep 2019)
Replies: 38
Views: 15334

Re: Maturity - Shizune Epilogue (A continuation of After Graduation)

Chapter 6 (Path B): First Time (Erotic) 2-07 As she comes out of the bathroom, her hair dried and face washed, she turns off the lights and meets me in the bedroom, where I have been waiting her for. The curtains are mostly closed. Moonlight shines into the room through the gap I intentionally leav...
by ShizuneFan2019
Wed Aug 28, 2019 1:07 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Maturity - Shizune Epilogue (A continuation of After Graduation) (Completed 12 Sep 2019)
Replies: 38
Views: 15334

Re: Maturity - Shizune Epilogue (A continuation of After Graduation)

Chapter 5 (Path B): Lost Treasure 1-04 I can’t help but think back about yesterday. Misha asked me to take care of Shizune, and I promised her. Yet, at the most critical moment, I screwed up. I don’t know what else I could do though. Maybe I should have shut up, but would that have helped? Shizune ...
by ShizuneFan2019
Wed Aug 28, 2019 1:02 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Maturity - Shizune Epilogue (A continuation of After Graduation) (Completed 12 Sep 2019)
Replies: 38
Views: 15334

Re: Maturity - Shizune Epilogue (A continuation of After Graduation)

Branch B: Talk her out of it I must stop her at once. How can I stop her? I have to control the situation. [Shizune! That’s enough! Misha asks you not to keep butting heads with others. I need to stop you from doing this!] [SO YOU’RE TRYING TO BE THE HERO HUH? YOU KNOW WHAT? THIS IS NOT YOUR BUSINE...
by ShizuneFan2019
Tue Aug 27, 2019 5:06 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Maturity - Shizune Epilogue (A continuation of After Graduation) (Completed 12 Sep 2019)
Replies: 38
Views: 15334

Re: Maturity - Shizune Epilogue (A continuation of After Graduation)

Epilogue (Path A): Stars Embrace 1-06 This looks good. Let’s print it out. I press the print button on the computer, then go to the printer to collect my budget plan. It looks very nice. I’m happy with my efforts. I take a glance at the clock. Wow, it’s already 9pm. I still have one more report to ...
by ShizuneFan2019
Mon Aug 26, 2019 5:04 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Maturity - Shizune Epilogue (A continuation of After Graduation) (Completed 12 Sep 2019)
Replies: 38
Views: 15334

Re: Maturity - Shizune Epilogue (A continuation of After Graduation)

Chapter 7 (Path A): Reunion (A) 1-15 Shizune is staring at the Risk board with intense concentration. With four Risk cards on hand, it is likely for any three of those to form a match, around 60% if I calculate correctly. This will give her a lot more reinforcements, which will probably allow her t...
by ShizuneFan2019
Mon Aug 26, 2019 4:41 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Maturity - Shizune Epilogue (A continuation of After Graduation) (Completed 12 Sep 2019)
Replies: 38
Views: 15334

Re: Maturity - Shizune Epilogue (A continuation of After Graduation)

Chapter 6 (Path A): Quality Time (Erotic) <2-21> As she comes out of the bathroom, her hair dried and face washed, she turns off the lights and meets my eyes. I have been waiting for her outside the bathroom. I stretch out my hands, signaling her to lie back on my arms. She rolls her eyes on me for...
by ShizuneFan2019
Tue Aug 20, 2019 4:26 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Maturity - Shizune Epilogue (A continuation of After Graduation) (Completed 12 Sep 2019)
Replies: 38
Views: 15334

Re: Maturity - Shizune Epilogue (A continuation of After Graduation)

Chapter 5 (Path A): Three-Way Chat None Reluctantly taking out her smartphone, Shizune presses a few keys to turn on the video chat function, and sets the phone upright. She then dials Misha’s number. After a short while, it connects. 1-07 [Hi Shicchan~! It’s so nice to see you again! Oh, hi Hiccha...
by ShizuneFan2019
Tue Aug 20, 2019 4:22 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Maturity - Shizune Epilogue (A continuation of After Graduation) (Completed 12 Sep 2019)
Replies: 38
Views: 15334

Re: Maturity - Shizune Epilogue (A continuation of After Graduation)

Branch A -- Calm her down Looks like further talking is not going to help. I must stop her at once. How can I do that? Her hands. Her hands are doing the talking. If I grab her hands, she cannot “say” anything. That will hopefully calm her down. 2-18 I immediately grab her slashing hands with both ...
by ShizuneFan2019
Mon Aug 19, 2019 1:46 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Maturity - Shizune Epilogue (A continuation of After Graduation) (Completed 12 Sep 2019)
Replies: 38
Views: 15334

Re: Maturity - Shizune Epilogue (A continuation of After Graduation)

"I will not influence your decision, but... and... and... and... Didn't convince you yet? Okay, I'll try again later." :lol Decision of...?? Making Iwanako in Todai? immune system Thanks! considerate of... Thanks! As for the end... Well, that escalated quickly... A bit too quickly... It f...
by ShizuneFan2019
Mon Aug 19, 2019 1:31 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Maturity - Shizune Epilogue (A continuation of After Graduation) (Completed 12 Sep 2019)
Replies: 38
Views: 15334

Re: Maturity - Shizune Epilogue (A continuation of After Graduation)

First and foremost, if you need a legend clarifying the different ways for your characters to communicate, then you have too many. You should either narrate them or consolidate some. For instance, there seems to be hardly any reason for the third convention to be explained at all. Then I'm willing ...
by ShizuneFan2019
Thu Aug 15, 2019 10:06 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Maturity - Shizune Epilogue (A continuation of After Graduation) (Completed 12 Sep 2019)
Replies: 38
Views: 15334

Re: Maturity - Shizune Epilogue (A continuation of After Graduation)

Readers: Update will not come until after the weekend. Think about how Hisao should do in this kind of situation, and see if your opinion matches mine. Feel free to discuss!
by ShizuneFan2019
Thu Aug 15, 2019 9:48 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Maturity - Shizune Epilogue (A continuation of After Graduation) (Completed 12 Sep 2019)
Replies: 38
Views: 15334

Re: Maturity - Shizune Epilogue (A continuation of After Graduation)

Chapter 4: Rivalry 1-08 “Hey Hideaki, it’s been a while. How are you doing?” “Not too well until you somehow managed to convince my sister to come.” His robotic voice never ceases to amaze me. He might be the only person in the world who can talk to Rin Tezuka, the artist girl, other than Emi. I’m ...
by ShizuneFan2019
Thu Aug 15, 2019 9:47 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Maturity - Shizune Epilogue (A continuation of After Graduation) (Completed 12 Sep 2019)
Replies: 38
Views: 15334

Re: Maturity - Shizune Epilogue (A continuation of After Graduation)

Well, as I said I don't know exactly what studying for a teacher entails in Japan. I just wanted to suggest that it's probably not just learning a single subject in University. Regarding Toudai, doing "reasonably well" in your exams is not enough to get accepted there by a long shot. If y...
by ShizuneFan2019
Thu Aug 15, 2019 6:21 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Maturity - Shizune Epilogue (A continuation of After Graduation) (Completed 12 Sep 2019)
Replies: 38
Views: 15334

Re: Maturity - Shizune Epilogue (A continuation of After Graduation)

You know... "Filling in the gaps" and then declaring everything around those gaps invalid in not really logical. Besides I can remember about half a dozen stories where Iwanako was bullied after Hisao left. I'm not sure you're doing either yourself or the other story a favour by stating w...
by ShizuneFan2019
Wed Aug 14, 2019 10:20 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Maturity - Shizune Epilogue (A continuation of After Graduation) (Completed 12 Sep 2019)
Replies: 38
Views: 15334

Re: Maturity - Shizune Epilogue (A continuation of After Graduation)

Having read the first two chapters there's not much I can say so far except that from a technical standpoint they are pretty well-written. Thanks! I put a lot of effort on it (while enjoying the writing, which is arguably the more important part). One thing I'm not certain is a good idea is the ref...