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by AwryZephyr
Wed Jul 31, 2019 3:53 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Footprints in the Snow - A Fanfiction
Replies: 11
Views: 4709

Re: Footprints in the Snow - A Fanfiction

And THAT'S a situation where a buffer will come in handy
You're right, though I wouldn't have thought about it if you hadn't mentioned it. Either way, starting from chapter four I'll keep a buffer of one or two chapters, just in case.
by AwryZephyr
Wed Jul 31, 2019 3:46 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Footprints in the Snow - A Fanfiction
Replies: 11
Views: 4709

Re: Footprints in the Snow - A Fanfiction

Your criticism is, like before, incredibly helpful. Though I'm hesitant to do it, I'll honestly probably edit the chapters a bit in just a few to put some of this into play and work harder to keep from having to do that in the future, as I know it's not that great to have to do. I suppose there ...
by AwryZephyr
Tue Jul 30, 2019 6:32 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Footprints in the Snow - A Fanfiction
Replies: 11
Views: 4709

Re: Footprints in the Snow - An OC Fanfiction

Thanks for your feedback, Mirage, it's really appreciated! In a sense, I think nitpicking is a good means to get a better story, ironing out the small details and all. Well, let's get started, shall we?

Second using an OC - worse a foreign OC - is usually considered a bad sign when a new author ...
by AwryZephyr
Mon Jul 29, 2019 6:52 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Footprints in the Snow - A Fanfiction
Replies: 11
Views: 4709

Re: Footprints in the Snow - An OC Fanfiction

Act 1: Scene 1 - Arrival

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The bus ride to Yamaku Academy from the airport in the nearest city is a decently long one, and I spend most of it observing the unfamiliar Japanese countryside. Thankfully, since ...
by AwryZephyr
Mon Jul 29, 2019 6:32 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Footprints in the Snow - A Fanfiction
Replies: 11
Views: 4709

Re: Footprints in the Snow - An OC Fanfiction

Wow Mirage, that was fast. Thanks for the warm welcome! And, honestly, I'll probably take your word on that. For now, though, I want to get some substance into the story before anything. Once I hit chapter four, I'll probably start to keep a backlog of chapters. And bear with me while I try to get ...
by AwryZephyr
Mon Jul 29, 2019 6:29 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Footprints in the Snow - A Fanfiction
Replies: 11
Views: 4709

Re: Footprints in the Snow - An OC Fanfiction

Act 0: Prologue

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The air was still. The birds were silent. The sounds of September went quiet as they watched the world fall out from under Ethan Taylor, and his life was forever changed.

Earlier ...
by AwryZephyr
Mon Jul 29, 2019 6:15 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Footprints in the Snow - A Fanfiction
Replies: 11
Views: 4709

Footprints in the Snow - A Fanfiction

Howdy all! If you happen to notice my account creation date, don't worry! I am, indeed, a newcomer! Now, I know you weren't going through the fanfiction section just to read an author's note, so I'll get straight to the point. I've been a big fan of Katawa Shoujou for a long time now. I've spent ...