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by KSFFWriter
Mon Mar 08, 2021 2:47 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 981252

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20210308 Ungraceful Reunion)

Well that's annoyingly unfinished. The entire story makes me feel tense and uncomfortable. Everyone's on edge or doing things that could lead to bigger problems all the time. Rin feels slightly off, but that's common in fanfiction. She's really hard to get right. Emi feels a little weird too, but ...
by KSFFWriter
Fri Mar 27, 2020 7:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 981252

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20200323 Objects in Space)

Man. This one has a real post-divorce sorta vibe. Although the 'you' could be dead, too, it's certainly possible. I'm not sure it specifies. But the tone through the story is pretty immaculate. No weird tangents or anything too over the top, just that creeping, drowning depression that comes after ...
by KSFFWriter
Sat Jan 04, 2020 8:44 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Feurox's Den of Sadness Updated 5th of January, 2024
Replies: 107
Views: 110110

Re: Feurox's Den of Sadness [01/05/2019]

Re: 8 Years

This was lovely. Somber and slow, with hints toward a more elaborate history behind things, but not actually going into it. It feels like it's exactly the right length for what it is.

Thanks for writing this!
by KSFFWriter
Tue Dec 24, 2019 6:04 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Secret Santa 2019 - Story collection
Replies: 54
Views: 55540

Re: Secret Santa 2019 - Story collection

Technically my first story posted here on the renai, I think. Glad I made the mostly self-set deadline of "Before Christmas"! Title: Christmas Double Date Victim: EurobeatJester Prompt: Write a story about Hisao and the girl of your choice heading down into town during a winter holiday (so Christmas ...
by KSFFWriter
Fri Jul 26, 2019 8:04 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 981252

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Radioactive (or Katawa: Call of Yamaku) (or something))

Radioactive (or Katawa: Call of Yamaku) (or something) by Scissorlips. I remember reading this when it came out. Though, on pastebin back then, and during the middle of Suzu route, if I recall correctly. It was a bit of a change in tone, let alone switching to a Hisao post-Emi. Anyway, it was a ...