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by NuclearStudent
Wed Feb 03, 2021 4:01 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Chatty's One-Off Collection (January 31st, 2021 — Cats and Dogs, Snowflakes and Stars)
Replies: 23
Views: 16574

Re: Chatty's One-Off Collection (January 31st, 2021 — Cats and Dogs, Snowflakes and Stars)

I would like to have more development histories in general - I quite like them. As I see it, post-mortems can be more interesting than living beings. While merely explaining what you meant in a story is rarely worthwhile, hearing the journey to a story is indeed worth it. Some people prefer to keep ...
by NuclearStudent
Thu Dec 31, 2020 11:15 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Secret Santa 2020 - Story collection
Replies: 60
Views: 89468

Re: Secret Santa 2020 - Story collection

If you don't mind me asking, how was the process of interpreting and researching the prompt? What was the timeline of events like?
by NuclearStudent
Thu Dec 31, 2020 11:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Secret Santa 2020 - Story collection
Replies: 60
Views: 89468

Re: Secret Santa 2020 - Story collection

First of all, I want to say that I'm utterly delighted by your execution of my prompt. It's better than what I dreamed of. I'm a fan of Hanako Fancopter's Operation Bedfellow tale about Kenji, and this has a similar kind of absurd wholesome energy. I naturally expected the prompt to involve the ...
by NuclearStudent
Fri Dec 25, 2020 11:49 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Crafty's One-Shots (Dec 31st, 2023: Happy With Yourself)
Replies: 150
Views: 182836

Re: Crafty's One-Shots (Dec 25th, 2020: Rising Steam)

Art that promotes the homosexual and undermines the family unit - where have our good Christian values gone?

For an unironic remark, though, a nice and normal story about normal events.
by NuclearStudent
Sat Dec 12, 2020 6:40 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iron Saki
Replies: 12
Views: 7966

Re: Iron Saki

:lol:

That's such a Bry detail to catch! And yes, my perspective on things have been described as reductive in the past, so why not take it literally?
by NuclearStudent
Sat Nov 28, 2020 5:20 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Alone Again (Naturally) - A Lilly One-Shot
Replies: 10
Views: 5442

Re: Alone Again (Naturally) - A Lilly One-Shot

Hello, and welcome to the forums! The death of Hisao is a classic fanfiction subject, and it's always nice to see a new face join us in our work. I'm a fairly fresh face myself and have gotten a lot from my time in this community. As a housewarming gift, I have some minor technical advice. She awoke ...
by NuclearStudent
Fri Nov 27, 2020 1:36 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Mirage's Myths
Replies: 23
Views: 39840

Re: Mirage's Myths

the initial quotation marks for "Catharsis" are actually commas
by NuclearStudent
Mon Nov 23, 2020 8:40 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Secret Santa 2019 - Story collection
Replies: 54
Views: 55722

Re: Secret Santa 2019 - Story collection

ProfAllister wrote: Mon Nov 23, 2020 8:30 am
brythain wrote: Mon Nov 23, 2020 7:39 am My little 2019 SX story for Downix is now up here. Enjoy!
If Kenji were everything he believed himself to be, he would be not entirely dissimilar to your Jigoro.
If Kenji were everything he wanted to be, he'd be fairly similar to Jigoro.
by NuclearStudent
Mon Nov 23, 2020 8:30 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#73—'Stripping')
Replies: 325
Views: 359424

Re: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#68—'A Bear Discovers Christmas')

As usual, your Jigs chooses to sound fun of himself. But all things are part of the ten thousand, and so on. elegant fluidity of her non-linear profile I stopped to think about this phrase for a few minutes. It is, probably deliberately, the least appealing way I've ever heard anybody describe a ...
by NuclearStudent
Wed Nov 18, 2020 4:15 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: NuclearStudent's Cursed Zone
Replies: 46
Views: 23534

Re: NuclearStudent's Cursed Zone

Going back to do some analysis of the chunks you found remarkable, Chatty. Will describe my process and where I think I fell short. The grass was cold that early in the morning, but Rin found a solid dry spot. I lay down and looked at the sky. It lit up red and orange and white in its regularly ...
by NuclearStudent
Wed Nov 18, 2020 3:25 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Life, Liberty, and the Pursuit of Pain (OC Story)
Replies: 21
Views: 28248

Re: Life, Liberty, and the Pursuit of Pain (OC Story)

Haha. I have a friend from Azerbaijan who I've offended multiple times by confusing Azerbaijan with Armenia. The difference is important enough for cultural genocide to be committed and for people to be shot and blown up over it. I'm not proud of my ignorance. I'm sure if I looked into the issue ...
by NuclearStudent
Tue Nov 17, 2020 8:37 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Life, Liberty, and the Pursuit of Pain (OC Story)
Replies: 21
Views: 28248

Re: Life, Liberty, and the Pursuit of Pain (OC Story)

https://static.wikia.nocookie.net/brigador/images/0/05/Parrot.jpg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/263?cb=20180718144210 This is who we are, now. And sorry to offend on the American thing. I recognize differences and nuance between the subtypes of American, but temperamentally, I'm a perceptual ...
by NuclearStudent
Mon Nov 16, 2020 7:27 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Life, Liberty, and the Pursuit of Pain (OC Story)
Replies: 21
Views: 28248

Re: Life, Liberty, and the Pursuit of Pain (OC Story)

Chatty's existence and analysis easily makes a story about five times more interesting, so kudos for that. Certainly he's also far more patient with details. In a typical story, we're fed all the necessary backstory right from the first chapter. We are given a clear indication about the history of ...
by NuclearStudent
Mon Nov 16, 2020 3:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Life, Liberty, and the Pursuit of Pain (OC Story)
Replies: 21
Views: 28248

Re: Life, Liberty, and the Pursuit of Pain (OC Story)

I think Mirage and I might feel similarly about this piece, but for completely different reasons. Colt is an absurd character. That's not an condemnation in itself. I've said before on the discord that this story is very American. I should clarify what I mean: to me, it comes off as a kind of ...