Search found 9 matches
- Tue Jun 04, 2019 11:47 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Salvation
- Replies: 13
- Views: 5984
Re: Salvation
Okay, so in regards to this, I just performed a search using a text editor throughout all of the scenes that Shizune was in, be it her route or others, and have found that there's only the possibility of her addressing Lilly by name 7 times or so at most throughout the entirety of the VN (including ...
- Tue Jun 04, 2019 11:11 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Salvation
- Replies: 13
- Views: 5984
Re: Salvation
"About Hanako and me" - since that is Hisao talking it could just be his mistake, but I thought I'd mention it anyway. Same here, but this time it's not direct speech. "She and Hanako" - this is direct speech again, but this is Shizune, and she wouldn't make a mistake like that. realize that my ...
- Tue Jun 04, 2019 4:14 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Shiina 2
- Replies: 11
- Views: 6658
Re: Shiina 2
Huh. This was a very interesting take on this particular event, which, as has already been mentioned, really doesn't get explored a lot in fan fiction and the like. It was kind of upsetting, a bit too real, and almost a bit unsettling at the end in a way that ties into established stuff really ...
- Tue Jun 04, 2019 4:06 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Salvation
- Replies: 13
- Views: 5984
Chapter 3
Ring. Ring. Ring. The repeating noise plays havoc on my ears, and I’m so anxious I can almost hear my heartbeat. It’s just a phone call; such an innocuous thing really shouldn’t have me as terrified as I am now. Despite that, my chest is pounding, my mouth feels drier than a desert, and I can’t seem ...
- Mon Jun 03, 2019 6:39 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Salvation
- Replies: 13
- Views: 5984
Chapter 2
The Shanghai is about as quiet as you might expect it to be at this time of day. All things considered, that’s a good thing. After ordering some coffee for myself, I feel myself start to relax for the first time today. I don’t think Misha and Shizune have stopped talking once since we began our trek ...
- Mon Jun 03, 2019 4:02 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Salvation
- Replies: 13
- Views: 5984
Re: Salvation
That's a long time to be laying into someone at full volume; Hanako's outburst was probably more like thirty seconds, and it was aimed at the primary target, rather than re-directed at a third party. Even if Hisao had that much fire in him I'd expect him to tire himself out doing it. Really fair ...
- Mon Jun 03, 2019 2:57 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Salvation
- Replies: 13
- Views: 5984
Re: Salvation
unfazed Oh dear. I've read a lot of books, played a lot of games, and done a healthy amount of writing in my time, and somehow I never processed that this is the proper spelling of unfazed. Oops. Aside from that, I've made a note of the grammatical and spelling errors you've pointed out and will be ...
- Mon Jun 03, 2019 3:14 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Salvation
- Replies: 13
- Views: 5984
Re: Salvation
Chapter 1 Frankly, things couldn't have gone worse. I’m not one to fantasize too much about “worst case scenarios” despite my cynical tendencies, but this goes leaps and bounds beyond what I’d expected. “I hate you more than anyone” certainly isn’t a sentence I’d ever expected to hear come out of Ha ...
- Mon Jun 03, 2019 3:01 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Salvation
- Replies: 13
- Views: 5984
Salvation
So, this is my first time posting here on these forums, and more than that this is my first ever attempt at a fan fic for Katawa Shoujo. I figured I could just get right into it, throw the fic out there, and call it good, but I figure this is as good of a time as any to introduce myself while I'm at ...