Thanks for the constructive criticism I appreciate it :D
I´m definetly gonna work on the mistakes I made in language.
To the plot.
Maybe I was too ambitious because the story isn´t over yet. It was planned as a trilogy and the second part would be Hisaos time at home, which he mentioned. I think ...
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- Sat Mar 02, 2019 6:05 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Summertales
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- Topic: Summertales
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Summertales
Beeing in Yamaku during holidays is a very different experience than during school days. Admittedly Yamaku is a very calm place, unlike my former school, but seeing the rooms and floors, which are normally filled with students and teachers, empty, can give you a weird feeling. If I wouldn´t knew it ...