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It just occurred to me that I forgot to link the new Chapter in the Table of Contents. I think that's enough to convince me to never take a vacation again. Also, it appears that despite the fact I get maybe 3-4 people commenting on a daily basis, I seem to get hundreds of pageviews. That's either a ...

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Oddly enough, I recently imagined Hanako as a mutant with four prehensile tongues and external versions of skull, ribcage, spine and pelvis. I think that's related enough.

Okay, so when I wrote this chapter, I decided to make it just a Hanako Chapter. Not sure when the next Rin Chapter will be. Also, we get to meet some of the art club! Again, sorry this is so late. Chapter 5: Smooth Painter ~~~~Hanako Ikezawa~~~~ Today is a beautiful day. The sun is shining, not a ...

Well, since I'm nearly 2 days late and Chapter 5 hasn't been posted, I may as well give an explanation. Chapter 5 is written. It took a while to write. Currently waiting for my beta readers to read it over (one is out of town, the other is oddly silent). However, don't take that as me saying I'm ...

If I can be honest, that just feels like a defiant misunderstanding of the character. It’s the same sort of reaction I have when I see someone writing Hanako as a social butterfly as a way of somehow objecting to the characterization of her as antisocial. It just doesn’t do a very good job of cap ...

Anyway, Rin Chapter. I have a unique perspective on Rin. Tell me what you think. Sorry to say I don't think it's very Rin-like... Your "Inner Rin" is completely logical and even perfectly self-aware. The only way you distinguish her thoughts from Hanako's in the other chapters is that Rin uses ...

I’m going to get so much shit for that Chapter Title I just know it. (EDIT: And I forgot to put it that's just fantastic). Anyway, Rin Chapter. I have a unique perspective on Rin. Tell me what you think. EDIT: Though I do ask you provide advice on how to improve, because just telling me what's w ...

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“When you put us both together, we have all of our limbs.” Again lines taken verbatim from the VN... I was thinking about this when I was writing the scene, which is why I explicitly wrote the lines so it wasn't a direct copy of the lines from the VN. Similar, yes, but not the same. According to the ...

I'm sorry, I couldn't read past Chapter 3. The effort put into making Takashi seem like some kind of scumbag just made this massively uncomfortable for me to read (I just dislike when purely negative traits are ascribed to a character). Which is sad, because I was in love with this concept when it ...

Alright, I've kept a schedule so far. Good. Hopefully, I've kept a reader-base as well. Anyway, here's chapter 3. Chapter 4-5 will be from Rin's perspective. A bit nervous with this chapter, since I'm still new to writing this. Remember, your comments/scalding criticisms aren't just welcome, they're ...

Decided to re-write parts of Chapter 1 and 2 so I'm not blatantly ripping lines from the game.

Two major points: 1. You slip into past tense a lot - basically whenever there is a paragraph without dialogue you almost always change to past tense. 2. You lifted a whole passage verbatim from the VN just replacing Hisao with Hanako. That's not leaving a good impression. 1. Yes, I am aware of ...

Alright, Chapter 2 is ready. This is 3 days ahead of Schedule, but since I already have it done and July 10 is Hanako's Birthday, I decided "Why the hell not?" Anyway, here's Chapter 2: Helping Hand(s) Yes, many of the chapter names are going to be puns. I love puns. I'm not apologizing. ~~~~Hanako ...

“Never tried it.” she said, firing off words rapidly. “Always too hot. Tea is weird. It’s dried leaves. Leaves aren’t tasty, but tea is.” This one is weird, but not in a Rin way... Has she or hasn't she tried tea before? If not how does she know it's too hot or that it's tasty? Most other SPaG issue ...