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by Lap
Wed Nov 13, 2024 7:22 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Love is a Choice - An Emi/Rin post-Yamaku story - 13/11/2024: Chapter 10
Replies: 24
Views: 3798

Re: Love is a Choice - An Emi/Rin post-Yamaku story - 13/11/2024: Chapter 10

I love the notion that somewhere there is a Japanese university that teaches English using Terry Pratchett. Another wonderful addition to this wonderful story. I’m glad Emi is giving the relationship a chance and not just running as fast as she can in the opposite direction. Rin’s sketchbook entries ...
by Lap
Thu Sep 19, 2024 11:15 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Love is a Choice - An Emi/Rin post-Yamaku story - 13/11/2024: Chapter 10
Replies: 24
Views: 3798

Re: Love is a Choice - An Emi/Rin post-Yamaku story - 17/09/2024: New Chapter

Nice to get the title explained :-) I’m loving the pacing of the development of their relationship. Emi & Rin could make a lovely couple, and I am glad to see more of them. You get into their heads most excellently. BTW, if you haven’t read it, I recommend Fractures. It’s not specifically a Emi & Rin ...
by Lap
Tue Aug 13, 2024 9:19 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Anarchy from the UK - (Molly one-shot/pilot) - Part II added!
Replies: 16
Views: 13946

Re: Anarchy from the UK - (Molly one-shot/pilot) - Part II added!

Ach, poor Ikuno. Looks like Hisao is starting to crush on Molly…

This was (is) lots of fun. As always. Thanks!

by Lap
Sun Jul 21, 2024 7:40 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Lap's One shots & misc - New July 10, 2024 - "Tatties in the Oven"
Replies: 49
Views: 49074

Re: Lap's One shots & misc - New July 10, 2024 - "Tatties in the Oven"

Hehehe, these two really wanted to visit that party xD Nice story, thanks! Yer welcome, & thanks! Ahhhh, that was brilliant, Lap! Hanako and Rin is an unusual pairing but clearly works! Thanks! If you liked them together, try Scarred Muse. Always happy to see more of your writing and this story was ...
by Lap
Sun Jul 21, 2024 7:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Avenues of Communication (Complete)
Replies: 75
Views: 59742

Re: Avenues of Communication (Complete)

Thank you! That's a nice choice for a "screenshot."

by Lap
Thu Jul 11, 2024 4:15 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Intentions [Completed]
Replies: 31
Views: 8297

Re: Intentions [Completed]

Thanks for a thoughtful exploration of the impact of Emi's thoughtless actions. The notion that this would totally break her is depressingly believable. I'm just sorry you couldn't work Rin into the story-- as Emi's closest friend, and as someone with a very different viewpoint on life, she might ...
by Lap
Wed Jul 10, 2024 7:46 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Secret Santa 2023 - Story collection
Replies: 30
Views: 80396

Re: Secret Santa 2023 - Story collection

I've at (very) long last completed my SS for Naryzhud/NoticeMeOppai. It's over in my one-shots thread: Tatties in the Oven. Hope it was worth the wait, Nary!

by Lap
Wed Jul 10, 2024 7:44 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Lap's One shots & misc - New July 10, 2024 - "Tatties in the Oven"
Replies: 49
Views: 49074

Re: Lap's One shots & misc - New July 10 2024 "Tatties in the Oven"

Tatties in the Oven Secret Santa 2023, for NoticeMeOppai (Naryzhud) ______________________________________________ Hanako was stretched out on the recliner in Rin’s studio, reading a book on her phone. She wasn’t modeling at the moment, but on her days off from work she liked to just spend time wit ...
by Lap
Sat Apr 13, 2024 10:04 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Wordplay - (Akio x Hisao one-shot/pilot)
Replies: 3
Views: 1591

Re: Wordplay - (Akio x Hisao one-shot/pilot)

Another fine work from Sharp-O, which is no surprise, but a welcome addition. This was most excellent, the KS world needs more gay stories. :D The fact that it's focused on Hisao makes it even better. It feels like it's expanding on your SS story for me, which I love. Also, I adored the idea of ...
by Lap
Tue Dec 12, 2023 3:35 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Housewarming" (18+) 09/11/24
Replies: 379
Views: 266903

Re: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Tender & Wild" (SS23) 12/12/23

Goddamn, the Random Number Generator Gods have smiled upon me this year! I was grinning like a fool reading this, it was lovely, and more than I ever could have wished for. Thanks for making a somewhat banal prompt into such a lovely little story! :D

by Lap
Tue Nov 14, 2023 11:58 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Trapped all the Same - An unfulfilled SS20 Prompt for Lap
Replies: 13
Views: 17726

Re: Trapped all the Same - An unfulfilled SS20 Prompt for Lap

"A wretched soul, bruised with adversity." A particularly ironic epigraph, given how easily hemophiliacs (Haru) bruise. Shakespeare, btw. :-) (Okay, yes, I had to look it up. I'm not Ritsu...) (As I warned you, I'm lousy at analysis & deep thinking about stories, so all I really have are random ...
by Lap
Sun Nov 12, 2023 4:31 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Consequences of Comfort
Replies: 11
Views: 27367

Consequences of Comfort

Epilogue --- Shiina looked through the shoe rack in the entryway of the apartment a second time, trying to find her shoes. “Miwako? Have you seen my black flats?” she called down the hall. When there was no answer, she shook her head at her mistake. Right, she’s doing overtime this week, with that a ...
by Lap
Sun Nov 12, 2023 4:30 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Consequences of Comfort
Replies: 11
Views: 27367

Consequences of Comfort

For the next several days, at around seven in the evening, Shiina received a text message from Shizune. Deleting the messages unread became easier with repetition, but she was surprised when they stopped coming after only five days. That’s a relief , she thought to herself. Trying to convince h ...
by Lap
Sun Nov 12, 2023 4:30 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Consequences of Comfort
Replies: 11
Views: 27367

Consequences of Comfort

Kasumi Miyata turned out to look like what Shiina had assumed her grandmother would look like—short and plump and full of smiles. “You can call me Grandmother Kasumi,” she said as they introduced themselves. “And you might as well call me Grandmother Aina, so we know which grandmother you’re talking ...
by Lap
Sun Nov 12, 2023 4:29 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Consequences of Comfort
Replies: 11
Views: 27367

Consequences of Comfort

Thanks, as always, to Feurox, for reading and suggestions and making me think about what I'm writing. What you're about to read is a much better story thanks to him. Thanks to Naryzhud (NoticeMeOppai) for additional proofreading and feedback. Thanks to Zee McZed for still more proofreading, and for ...