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I would have thought it impossible for me feel any kind of sympathy for Kenji, but you came close . A wonderful start to the holiday exchange, nicely done!

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I love the notion that somewhere there is a Japanese university that teaches English using Terry Pratchett.

Another wonderful addition to this wonderful story. I’m glad Emi is giving the relationship a chance and not just running as fast as she can in the opposite direction.

Rin’s sketchbook ...

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Nice to get the title explained :-)

I’m loving the pacing of the development of their relationship. Emi & Rin could make a lovely couple, and I am glad to see more of them. You get into their heads most excellently.

BTW, if you haven’t read it, I recommend Fractures. It’s not specifically a Emi ...

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Ach, poor Ikuno. Looks like Hisao is starting to crush on Molly…

This was (is) lots of fun. As always. Thanks!

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Hehehe, these two really wanted to visit that party xD

Nice story, thanks!

Yer welcome, & thanks!

Ahhhh, that was brilliant, Lap! Hanako and Rin is an unusual pairing but clearly works!

Thanks! If you liked them together, try Scarred Muse.

Always happy to see more of your writing and ...

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Thank you! That's a nice choice for a "screenshot."

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Thanks for a thoughtful exploration of the impact of Emi's thoughtless actions. The notion that this would totally break her is depressingly believable.

I'm just sorry you couldn't work Rin into the story-- as Emi's closest friend, and as someone with a very different viewpoint on life, she might ...

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I've at (very) long last completed my SS for Naryzhud/NoticeMeOppai. It's over in my one-shots thread: Tatties in the Oven. Hope it was worth the wait, Nary!

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Tatties in the Oven

Secret Santa 2023, for NoticeMeOppai (Naryzhud)

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Hanako was stretched out on the recliner in Rin’s studio, reading a book on her phone. She wasn’t modeling at the moment, but on her days off from work she liked to just spend ...

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Another fine work from Sharp-O, which is no surprise, but a welcome addition.

This was most excellent, the KS world needs more gay stories. :D The fact that it's focused on Hisao makes it even better. It feels like it's expanding on your SS story for me, which I love.

Also, I adored the idea of ...

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Goddamn, the Random Number Generator Gods have smiled upon me this year! I was grinning like a fool reading this, it was lovely, and more than I ever could have wished for. Thanks for making a somewhat banal prompt into such a lovely little story!

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"A wretched soul, bruised with adversity."
A particularly ironic epigraph, given how easily hemophiliacs (Haru) bruise.

Shakespeare, btw. :-)

(Okay, yes, I had to look it up. I'm not Ritsu...)

(As I warned you, I'm lousy at analysis & deep thinking about stories, so all I really have are ...

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Epilogue

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Shiina looked through the shoe rack in the entryway of the apartment a second time, trying to find her shoes. “Miwako? Have you seen my black flats?” she called down the hall. When there was no answer, she shook her head at her mistake. Right, she’s doing overtime this week, with ...

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For the next several days, at around seven in the evening, Shiina received a text message from Shizune. Deleting the messages unread became easier with repetition, but she was surprised when they stopped coming after only five days. That’s a relief , she thought to herself. Trying to convince ...

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Kasumi Miyata turned out to look like what Shiina had assumed her grandmother would look like—short and plump and full of smiles. “You can call me Grandmother Kasumi,” she said as they introduced themselves.

“And you might as well call me Grandmother Aina, so we know which grandmother you’re ...

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