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by Lap
Fri May 17, 2019 10:48 pm
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: Lap's misc fan art. NSFW. New 1-5-20
Replies: 14
Views: 16448

Re: Lap's misc fan art. NSFW. New 5-17-19

Which is weird, given what their base colors started as.
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But it's easy enough to alter...
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by Lap
Fri May 17, 2019 5:50 pm
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: Lap's misc fan art. NSFW. New 1-5-20
Replies: 14
Views: 16448

Miki keeping Suzu Awake.

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by Lap
Tue May 14, 2019 7:53 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Avenues of Communication (Complete)
Replies: 72
Views: 54981

Re: Avenues of Communication (updated 5-14-19)

Chapter 16 ________________________ As we walked up to the house, the lights shining through the windows told me that my parents were already home from work. I gave Shizune another reassuring smile before opening the door. “I’m home!” I called out as we entered the house. As we took off our shoes a...
by Lap
Mon May 13, 2019 10:48 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rin Epilogue: The Long Road (Updated 16/6/2023)
Replies: 65
Views: 78100

Re: Rin Epilouge: The Long Road

I quite enjoyed this. There are a few technical issues, as Mirage & Feurox pointed out, but overall I found the story & tone very fitting for Rin & Hisao, and I look forward to reading more of it. Good stuff.
by Lap
Wed May 08, 2019 6:31 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Avenues of Communication (Complete)
Replies: 72
Views: 54981

Re: Avenues of Communication (updated 5-8-19)

Chapter 15 ________________________ The next morning we woke up in time for breakfast. Barely. It was simple but delicious fare, elegantly presented. Afterwards, we went out to explore town a little more. We visited the glass works I'd read about, and Shizune indulged my fascination with the glassb...
by Lap
Wed Apr 17, 2019 1:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Avenues of Communication (Complete)
Replies: 72
Views: 54981

Re: Avenues of Communication (updated 4-17-19)

Chapter 14 ______________________ Christmas was traditionally a romantic holiday, and this was the first time I’d actually have someone to be romantic with. I hesitantly broached the subject with Shizune, and was somewhat surprised to find that she was actually enthusiastic about the notion. She po...
by Lap
Sun Apr 14, 2019 10:50 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Unwritten Rules
Replies: 7
Views: 4042

Re: Unwritten Rules

brythain wrote: Sun Apr 14, 2019 7:46 pm Good title, promising beginning... oh, that wasn't the story! :D
Hmm. Though it does make for an intriguing title....
by Lap
Wed Apr 03, 2019 11:04 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yet another one-shot thread (updated 2020-3-9)
Replies: 137
Views: 67172

Re: Yet another one-shot thread (updated 2019-04-03)

Awww, poor Hanako. That's worse than having to watch their cuddle-pile after pizza. This was supposed to be her evening with Miki.

Fun story, I'm loving the way the M/H/S triad is developing.
by Lap
Tue Apr 02, 2019 8:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Signs (Very Late S9 Submission)
Replies: 4
Views: 3556

Re: Signs (Very Late S9 Submission)

Cool concept. It makes sense that Rin might know how to read sign, despite being unable to sign herself—it's a visual language, and she's a visually oriented person.

That was fun. Thanks!
by Lap
Sun Mar 31, 2019 10:05 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Adventures of Captain Katawa
Replies: 10
Views: 6715

Re: The Adventures of Captain Katawa

I keep coming back to this...dunno why it tickles me so, but it does.

I assume the keyboard controls pressure pads on her legs, which she can "read" like tactile sign language?
by Lap
Sun Mar 24, 2019 6:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Avenues of Communication (Complete)
Replies: 72
Views: 54981

Chapter 13

Chapter 13 ________________________ It seemed like Misha’s birthday party was the last time any of us got to relax. It was the final calm before the storm, as the end of the year started rushing closer, and the specter of university entrance exams loomed ever larger. I had hoped that having made a ...
by Lap
Tue Feb 26, 2019 9:16 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Sound of Silence, a Shizune one-shot ('All I Have'/'Enjoy the Silence' tie-in)
Replies: 8
Views: 4520

Re: The Sound of Silence, a Shizune one-shot ('All I Have'/'Enjoy the Silence' tie-in)

Nice story, fits in well with its predecessors. It felt very much like Hisao to put off breaking up for as long as he could, instead of just doing it up front as soon as he saw Shizune. Well, we all have our moments of cowardice, and it''s not an easy task. But I kept getting annoyed by Shizune's re...
by Lap
Tue Feb 26, 2019 9:10 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Avenues of Communication (Complete)
Replies: 72
Views: 54981

Re: Avenues of Communication (updated 2-24-19)

That was lovely, what a fantastic thing to read over my morning coffee! The art is great, is it a Lap original? Yup! Thanks! Good. She deserves it. Hell yeah, if anyone deserves a btggf it's Misha! :-) Indeed. (er...hm.... "Big Tall Goth GirlFriend"?) I second Scroff’s comment, my toast a...
by Lap
Sun Feb 24, 2019 10:06 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Avenues of Communication (Complete)
Replies: 72
Views: 54981

Avenues of Communication, Chapter 12

Chapter 12 ________________________ Given that Misha’s birthday party had been my idea, I had expected to have to organize it, but Shizune had taken over that task early on. You have enough to do with Student Council work , she’d said. I’ll take care of this. I was surprised that her quest for the ...
by Lap
Wed Feb 20, 2019 12:40 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Avenues of Communication (Complete)
Replies: 72
Views: 54981

Re: Avenues of Communication (updated 2-19-19)

“One for Aiochan, one for Mirachan, one for Aiochan, one for Aiochan…” Her name is "Aoi". "Ai" would also be a suitable Japanese name if this is not supposed to be the sidecharacter from the VN, but "Aio" is not a name. Oops. Brain fart on my part. Fixed, thanks. [But ...