Chapter 16 ________________________ As we walked up to the house, the lights shining through the windows told me that my parents were already home from work. I gave Shizune another reassuring smile before opening the door. “I’m home!” I called out as we entered the house. As we took off our shoes a...
I quite enjoyed this. There are a few technical issues, as Mirage & Feurox pointed out, but overall I found the story & tone very fitting for Rin & Hisao, and I look forward to reading more of it. Good stuff.
Chapter 15 ________________________ The next morning we woke up in time for breakfast. Barely. It was simple but delicious fare, elegantly presented. Afterwards, we went out to explore town a little more. We visited the glass works I'd read about, and Shizune indulged my fascination with the glassb...
Chapter 14 ______________________ Christmas was traditionally a romantic holiday, and this was the first time I’d actually have someone to be romantic with. I hesitantly broached the subject with Shizune, and was somewhat surprised to find that she was actually enthusiastic about the notion. She po...
Cool concept. It makes sense that Rin might know how to read sign, despite being unable to sign herself—it's a visual language, and she's a visually oriented person.
Chapter 13 ________________________ It seemed like Misha’s birthday party was the last time any of us got to relax. It was the final calm before the storm, as the end of the year started rushing closer, and the specter of university entrance exams loomed ever larger. I had hoped that having made a ...
Nice story, fits in well with its predecessors. It felt very much like Hisao to put off breaking up for as long as he could, instead of just doing it up front as soon as he saw Shizune. Well, we all have our moments of cowardice, and it''s not an easy task. But I kept getting annoyed by Shizune's re...
That was lovely, what a fantastic thing to read over my morning coffee! The art is great, is it a Lap original? Yup! Thanks! Good. She deserves it. Hell yeah, if anyone deserves a btggf it's Misha! :-) Indeed. (er...hm.... "Big Tall Goth GirlFriend"?) I second Scroff’s comment, my toast a...
Chapter 12 ________________________ Given that Misha’s birthday party had been my idea, I had expected to have to organize it, but Shizune had taken over that task early on. You have enough to do with Student Council work , she’d said. I’ll take care of this. I was surprised that her quest for the ...
“One for Aiochan, one for Mirachan, one for Aiochan, one for Aiochan…” Her name is "Aoi". "Ai" would also be a suitable Japanese name if this is not supposed to be the sidecharacter from the VN, but "Aio" is not a name. Oops. Brain fart on my part. Fixed, thanks. [But ...