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- Mon Jul 29, 2019 10:25 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Avenues of Communication (Complete)
- Replies: 72
- Views: 54981
Re: Avenues of Communication (Completed 7-29-19)
EPILOGUE _______________________ September 30, 2018, 10:48 p.m. Shizune screamed. It wasn’t the first time she’d screamed in the last few hours. Though hopefully it might be the last. I tried to catch her eye as she gasped and panted. [Come on, honey, you can do it! Breath!] “Don’…you…‘honey’… me!”...
- Mon Jul 29, 2019 10:20 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Avenues of Communication (Complete)
- Replies: 72
- Views: 54981
Re: Avenues of Communication (Completed 7-29-19)
Chapter 18 ________________________ We went from Mai’s place to Shizune’s house. For what turned out to be a surprisingly uneventful visit. Jigoro was still brash, loud, and annoying but…somehow, knowing a little bit of his history, I found him easier to take. Not pleasant , mind you, but nowhere n...
- Sun Jul 28, 2019 3:45 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Lap's One shots & misc - New Jan 3 2023 - "Dashing Through the Snow..."
- Replies: 44
- Views: 45823
Re: Lap's One shots & misc - New Entry 7-28-19
So, I wrote this scene fairly early on while writing Avenues of Communication, but I never quite found a place where it fit in. It's more about Emi, not Shizune or Hisao or Misha. So here it is, more a slice-of-life than a story per se. Emi Swimming __________________________________________ I was ...
- Wed Jul 24, 2019 9:14 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Feurox's Den of Sadness Updated 5th of January, 2024
- Replies: 107
- Views: 104649
Re: Ekephrasis and Other Stories [07/23/2019]
I love Rin's interpretation of what Shizune is saying; it's very Rin. And her conviction that she's able to read sign is so deep that for a moment I was wondering if she did, in fact, know sign...
Nicely done, I like Rashomon-style stories, especially when the two POV's are so divergent.
Nicely done, I like Rashomon-style stories, especially when the two POV's are so divergent.
- Tue Jul 23, 2019 10:04 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Riposte (Rika Story) (Completed)
- Replies: 48
- Views: 41410
Re: Riposte (Rika Story) (Updated 7-12-19)
If there's a difference that makes it OOC, it's probably that here it happens so fast (on literally their first day of knowing each other), as opposed to the sex scenes in-game obviously coming after he and the girls have been talking for a while. That strikes me as a really huge difference. But Hi...
- Wed Jul 17, 2019 5:26 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Lap's One shots & misc - New Jan 3 2023 - "Dashing Through the Snow..."
- Replies: 44
- Views: 45823
For SCIENCE~!
For SCIENCE~! This little bit of fluff was also in response to the latest story prompts put out on the Discord, but I didn't finish it before the deadline. It's probably the fluffiest thing I've ever written. Hope it at least gets a giggle. ________________________________________ Emi clattered dow...
- Tue Jul 09, 2019 8:47 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Avenues of Communication (Complete)
- Replies: 72
- Views: 54981
Re: Avenues of Communication (updated 7-1-19)
D'oh! I should research names a little more closely before I use them. Thanks.
- Tue Jul 09, 2019 8:44 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yet another one-shot thread (updated 2020-3-9)
- Replies: 137
- Views: 67172
Re: Yet another one-shot thread (updated 2019-06-25)
It's not stated that Misha offed herself is it? Never stated explicitly, no; Scroff is a subtler and better writer than that. But lines like "Silly Hicchan~, you shouldn't be wishing your life away." "Isn't that what you did? Rather successfully if I may say so." " 'Where's...
- Mon Jul 08, 2019 6:54 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Sgt. Pepper's Lonely Hearts Club Band (Oneshot thread)
- Replies: 60
- Views: 64852
Re: Shizune's Guide to Board Games as a Negotiation Tool
I adore the notion that Kenji isn't a total fruitcake, he's just messing with people. Very fun!
- Mon Jul 08, 2019 5:17 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Avenues of Communication (Complete)
- Replies: 72
- Views: 54981
Re: Avenues of Communication (updated 7-1-19)
Hmm... I wonder when Shizune realized about Mai's orientation... She said she didn't know about it in the morning, then they were out all day, and somewhere along the line she realized and had a chance to talk with her mother about it... Nuts, I phrased it poorly--should be more along the lines of,...
- Sun Jul 07, 2019 2:58 pm
- Forum: Fan Art
- Topic: Lap's misc fan art. NSFW. New 1-5-20
- Replies: 14
- Views: 16448
Re: Lap's misc fan art. NSFW. New 7-7-19
Shy Hanako biting her lip.
- Sat Jul 06, 2019 4:27 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yet another one-shot thread (updated 2020-3-9)
- Replies: 137
- Views: 67172
Re: Yet another one-shot thread (updated 2019-06-25)
That's haunting (no pun intended), sweet, and depressing, all at once. Nicely done, even though I find it hard to applaud any universe where Misha gives in to suicide. Can't say it's unrealistic , especially given the stats on suicide among LGBTQ youth, but it's still sad. And I'm glad Shizune is pu...
- Sat Jul 06, 2019 2:37 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Lap's One shots & misc - New Jan 3 2023 - "Dashing Through the Snow..."
- Replies: 44
- Views: 45823
Lap's One shots & misc - New Jan 3 2023 - "Dashing Through the Snow..."
Miscellaneous beyond all reason. Contest entries, cut scenes, fluff & nonsense. Off the Slopes — Contest entry — See below Akira's Surprise — S9 entry For SCIENCE~! — Silly piece of fluff, with Misha & Emi Emi Swimming — a scene that got cut from Avenues of Communication Akio and Akira — Con...
- Mon Jul 01, 2019 10:27 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Avenues of Communication (Complete)
- Replies: 72
- Views: 54981
Re: Avenues of Communication (updated 7-1-19)
Chapter 17 ________________________ Mai buzzed us in to the apartment building, and we crossed the small lobby to the elevators. Shizune gestured to a sign to the side of the elevators, which pointed down the hall toward a pool. I took her meaning, but I shook my head. [I didn't bring a swimsuit.] ...
- Thu Jun 13, 2019 10:10 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yet another one-shot thread (updated 2020-3-9)
- Replies: 137
- Views: 67172
Re: Yet another one-shot thread (updated 2019-06-13)
I wouldn't call that "fluffy"—hammering out interpersonals in a polyamorous relationship is essential and difficult. And, the way they approached it, hot . Lots of fun! Thanks for this glimpse inside their dynamics. And thank-you for the word mudita —sounds like it's a close translation fo...