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by Lap
Mon Jul 29, 2019 10:25 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Avenues of Communication (Complete)
Replies: 72
Views: 54981

Re: Avenues of Communication (Completed 7-29-19)

EPILOGUE _______________________ September 30, 2018, 10:48 p.m. Shizune screamed. It wasn’t the first time she’d screamed in the last few hours. Though hopefully it might be the last. I tried to catch her eye as she gasped and panted. [Come on, honey, you can do it! Breath!] “Don’…you…‘honey’… me!”...
by Lap
Mon Jul 29, 2019 10:20 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Avenues of Communication (Complete)
Replies: 72
Views: 54981

Re: Avenues of Communication (Completed 7-29-19)

Chapter 18 ________________________ We went from Mai’s place to Shizune’s house. For what turned out to be a surprisingly uneventful visit. Jigoro was still brash, loud, and annoying but…somehow, knowing a little bit of his history, I found him easier to take. Not pleasant , mind you, but nowhere n...
by Lap
Sun Jul 28, 2019 3:45 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Lap's One shots & misc - New Jan 3 2023 - "Dashing Through the Snow..."
Replies: 44
Views: 45823

Re: Lap's One shots & misc - New Entry 7-28-19

So, I wrote this scene fairly early on while writing Avenues of Communication, but I never quite found a place where it fit in. It's more about Emi, not Shizune or Hisao or Misha. So here it is, more a slice-of-life than a story per se. Emi Swimming __________________________________________ I was ...
by Lap
Wed Jul 24, 2019 9:14 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Feurox's Den of Sadness Updated 5th of January, 2024
Replies: 107
Views: 104649

Re: Ekephrasis and Other Stories [07/23/2019]

I love Rin's interpretation of what Shizune is saying; it's very Rin. And her conviction that she's able to read sign is so deep that for a moment I was wondering if she did, in fact, know sign... :D

Nicely done, I like Rashomon-style stories, especially when the two POV's are so divergent.
by Lap
Tue Jul 23, 2019 10:04 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Riposte (Rika Story) (Completed)
Replies: 48
Views: 41410

Re: Riposte (Rika Story) (Updated 7-12-19)

If there's a difference that makes it OOC, it's probably that here it happens so fast (on literally their first day of knowing each other), as opposed to the sex scenes in-game obviously coming after he and the girls have been talking for a while. That strikes me as a really huge difference. But Hi...
by Lap
Wed Jul 17, 2019 5:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Lap's One shots & misc - New Jan 3 2023 - "Dashing Through the Snow..."
Replies: 44
Views: 45823

For SCIENCE~!

For SCIENCE~! This little bit of fluff was also in response to the latest story prompts put out on the Discord, but I didn't finish it before the deadline. It's probably the fluffiest thing I've ever written. Hope it at least gets a giggle. ________________________________________ Emi clattered dow...
by Lap
Tue Jul 09, 2019 8:47 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Avenues of Communication (Complete)
Replies: 72
Views: 54981

Re: Avenues of Communication (updated 7-1-19)

Mirage_GSM wrote: Tue Jul 09, 2019 5:26 am "Yasui" means "cheap" in Japanese. Was just a joke :-)
D'oh! I should research names a little more closely before I use them. Thanks.
by Lap
Tue Jul 09, 2019 8:44 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yet another one-shot thread (updated 2020-3-9)
Replies: 137
Views: 67172

Re: Yet another one-shot thread (updated 2019-06-25)

It's not stated that Misha offed herself is it? Never stated explicitly, no; Scroff is a subtler and better writer than that. But lines like "Silly Hicchan~, you shouldn't be wishing your life away." "Isn't that what you did? Rather successfully if I may say so." " 'Where's...
by Lap
Mon Jul 08, 2019 6:54 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sgt. Pepper's Lonely Hearts Club Band (Oneshot thread)
Replies: 60
Views: 64852

Re: Shizune's Guide to Board Games as a Negotiation Tool

I adore the notion that Kenji isn't a total fruitcake, he's just messing with people. Very fun!
by Lap
Mon Jul 08, 2019 5:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Avenues of Communication (Complete)
Replies: 72
Views: 54981

Re: Avenues of Communication (updated 7-1-19)

Hmm... I wonder when Shizune realized about Mai's orientation... She said she didn't know about it in the morning, then they were out all day, and somewhere along the line she realized and had a chance to talk with her mother about it... Nuts, I phrased it poorly--should be more along the lines of,...
by Lap
Sun Jul 07, 2019 2:58 pm
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: Lap's misc fan art. NSFW. New 1-5-20
Replies: 14
Views: 16448

Re: Lap's misc fan art. NSFW. New 7-7-19

Shy Hanako biting her lip.
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by Lap
Sat Jul 06, 2019 4:27 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yet another one-shot thread (updated 2020-3-9)
Replies: 137
Views: 67172

Re: Yet another one-shot thread (updated 2019-06-25)

That's haunting (no pun intended), sweet, and depressing, all at once. Nicely done, even though I find it hard to applaud any universe where Misha gives in to suicide. Can't say it's unrealistic , especially given the stats on suicide among LGBTQ youth, but it's still sad. And I'm glad Shizune is pu...
by Lap
Sat Jul 06, 2019 2:37 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Lap's One shots & misc - New Jan 3 2023 - "Dashing Through the Snow..."
Replies: 44
Views: 45823

Lap's One shots & misc - New Jan 3 2023 - "Dashing Through the Snow..."

Miscellaneous beyond all reason. Contest entries, cut scenes, fluff & nonsense. Off the Slopes — Contest entry — See below Akira's Surprise — S9 entry For SCIENCE~! — Silly piece of fluff, with Misha & Emi Emi Swimming — a scene that got cut from Avenues of Communication Akio and Akira — Con...
by Lap
Mon Jul 01, 2019 10:27 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Avenues of Communication (Complete)
Replies: 72
Views: 54981

Re: Avenues of Communication (updated 7-1-19)

Chapter 17 ________________________ Mai buzzed us in to the apartment building, and we crossed the small lobby to the elevators. Shizune gestured to a sign to the side of the elevators, which pointed down the hall toward a pool. I took her meaning, but I shook my head. [I didn't bring a swimsuit.] ...
by Lap
Thu Jun 13, 2019 10:10 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yet another one-shot thread (updated 2020-3-9)
Replies: 137
Views: 67172

Re: Yet another one-shot thread (updated 2019-06-13)

I wouldn't call that "fluffy"—hammering out interpersonals in a polyamorous relationship is essential and difficult. And, the way they approached it, hot . Lots of fun! Thanks for this glimpse inside their dynamics. And thank-you for the word mudita —sounds like it's a close translation fo...