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by Lap
Sat Oct 27, 2018 8:45 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Arrival [updated 10-31-18]
Replies: 22
Views: 10896

Re: Arrival [updated 10-27-18]

Part IV: Shopping ____________ A full stomach and the prospect of having a new library full of books to explore kept my spirits buoyed for the walk back to the Aura-Mart. I was relieved to find that my strategy of waiting a while had paid off, and there was only a single customer in the store now. ...
by Lap
Thu Oct 25, 2018 1:04 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Arrival [updated 10-31-18]
Replies: 22
Views: 10896

Re: Arrival

Thanks for all the kinds words! Part III: Venturing Out ____________ Saturday morning I was awakened early by twin pains in my belly—my empty stomach, protesting the continued lack of food, and lower twinges that meant my period was imminent. I groaned to myself as I got out of bed. I hadn’t brought...
by Lap
Tue Oct 23, 2018 3:04 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Arrival [updated 10-31-18]
Replies: 22
Views: 10896

Re: Arrival

Part II: Yasuda ____________ After I finished my letter, I spent some time rearranging my meager possessions, trying to distract myself from my hunger. I could ignore the grumbling in my belly, but eventually other biological pressures forced me to leave my room. It had been over an hour since that...
by Lap
Mon Oct 22, 2018 4:46 pm
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: Yamaku Front Gates
Replies: 2
Views: 10677

Yamaku Front Gates

Visited Brown University (source of most of the Yamaku campus shots) this last weekend. Didn't spot Rin or Lilly, but I got this nice picture of the front gates...Image
by Lap
Mon Oct 22, 2018 11:57 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yet another one-shot thread (updated 2020-3-9)
Replies: 137
Views: 67183

Re: Yet another one-shot thread

I'm so delighted to see the triad of Miki/Suzu/Hisao prospering. And I love the notion that, although she loves them, Miki occasionally finds her lovers a bit...staid and conservative. & Koki is a wonderful OC. Thanks for the story!
by Lap
Tue Oct 16, 2018 8:39 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Arrival [updated 10-31-18]
Replies: 22
Views: 10896

Re: Arrival

I really enjoyed this, thanks for posting it! Thank you , and you're welcome! ... I also found myself identifying with Mama Ando - my daughter is in her late teens and I'm doing my best to help her be ready for independent life, but I have to make a conscious effort to step back and let her make he...
by Lap
Sat Oct 13, 2018 10:48 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Arrival [updated 10-31-18]
Replies: 22
Views: 10896

Re: Arrival

Thanks, both of you, for the kind words! Honestly, not sure if I will continue. I have some vague notions leading up to the time Lilly arrives at Yamaku (need to remember/research exactly when that was), but we'll see. The OC Takeko Yasuda is slowly evolving in my mind. Not a friend, but...a foil of...
by Lap
Fri Oct 12, 2018 1:41 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Arrival [updated 10-31-18]
Replies: 22
Views: 10896

Arrival [updated 10-31-18]

Part I: Yamaku Part II: Yasuda Part III: Venturing Out Part IV: Shopping Part V: Nurse Can also be read on Ao3 . ____________ Mama Ando once said that I should just ignore all the teasing at school. Mama Ando said that true beauty came from within. Mama Ando said that those bullies who teased me we...
by Lap
Sun Sep 16, 2018 6:39 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: When the Puddles Dry - Post Rin Neutral/True Ending Epilogue, One Shot(?)
Replies: 9
Views: 4993

Re: When the Puddles Dry - Post Rin Neutral/True Ending Epilogue, One Shot(?)

...Saying his opinion of the matter is the only important one when at that point he plays no role at all in her life anymore and doesn't expect to in the future is quite a bit narcissistic... Yes, well, Hisao has always been a bit self-involved and emotionally oblivious. I thought his reaction was ...
by Lap
Wed Sep 05, 2018 9:15 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: An Unusual Friendship (Misha x Hanako; Complete)
Replies: 143
Views: 128234

Re: An Unusual Friendship (Misha x Hanako)

Why is it that in any story that contains lesbians, all other girls turn out to be lesbian as well? I always wondered that... And most of you probably know that I do not have the highest opinion of Lilly from her path in the VN, but even I don't think she would do something like that - even if she ...
by Lap
Mon Sep 03, 2018 8:25 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Unforeseen Consequences, Katawa Shoujo Forums Edition
Replies: 50
Views: 21042

Re: Unforeseen Consequences, Katawa Shoujo Forums Edition

A couple of illogical things in this one, but let me just point out that he apparently traveled halfway around the world without knowing the name of the place he was going to - and apparently he arrived anyway... And apparently he already knew half the student body... I mean, Shizune & Akira ar...
by Lap
Mon Aug 27, 2018 10:24 pm
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: Illustration for fanfic
Replies: 0
Views: 67895

Illustration for fanfic

Illustration I did for my fan fic Home.

https://archiveofourown.org/works/15614 ... s/36254490

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by Lap
Tue Aug 21, 2018 10:43 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (New NSFW Art 2/22)
Replies: 1207
Views: 1182473

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Act 3 Completed 8/20)

Beautifully written and moving. I'm utterly terrified of where it's going--there are no happy endings for Saki's story, unless you stop before the end--but I'm looking forward to it nonetheless. Thanks!
by Lap
Tue Aug 21, 2018 6:06 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Home (Complete)
Replies: 19
Views: 14509

Re: Home (Complete)

Well...I hope it was at least an enjoyable adventure!

As for Lilly's comment, she was just making a joke at her cousin's expense—saying that they were so loud that a deaf person could have heard them.
by Lap
Mon Aug 20, 2018 8:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Home (Complete)
Replies: 19
Views: 14509

Home (Complete)

So, I finally finished Home , my long work that An Unexpected Visitor was excerpted from. It's a story about Hanako & Hisao at University, sharing an apartment with their friend Lilly. Life Happens... It clocks in at close to 60,000 words, so...fair warning. :D It's on Ao3: Home . Ao3 has an adv...