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Yeah I won't really try to mount much defense for Hisao--I'm not sure what his personality is "supposed" to be outside of being a loser who lucks his way into getting laid. I've never made it a secret that I consider the typical portrayal of Hisao to be boring so I absolutely went into th...

Chapter 8 I look around as if the thought had never occurred to me. “Heh, yeah, I guess I am!” I answer happily. I expect more laughs or cheers from the peanut gallery but the mood has taken an abrupt shift. I can’t blame the other students for thinking I’m in some kind of big trouble here—they jus...

Chapter 7 Rika doesn’t show up at the track to bother me the next morning. I wonder if this is her giving me some space or just being too lazy to get up early… the more I think about it, the more certain I am it’s the latter. Emi seems a bit on edge, with more of that fake happiness she puts on whe...

Alright, and here's my new round of chapters! I'm going to try to wrap up the story with the next update after this one. Daw, thanks for the shoutout :) I said it in the discord server but I'll totally say it again: I love what you've done with Rika here, although I didn't initially. That's not to s...

Well that was quite the change of pace! I didn't think you were serious about the 500 word thing lol. A creative and appropriate way to do it.

Now this is epic This is my favorite contest entry out of the ones I've read so far, though that probably doesn't surprise anyone. But aside from the fact that it's a yuri pairing! I think you really did well with characterization and dialogue. You really took a different tack with Yuuko than I did,...

It's not stated that Misha offed herself is it? It doesn't seem clear that Hisao and Shizune are getting back together, either, just that they're seeing each other again. The story as a whole is pretty open ended. Quite different from the funnier ones with Miki in them, and definitely on the depress...

I agree, you took a rare pairing and made a nice interaction out of it. In particular you gave Kenji some nice characterization. I noticed at one point they both prefaced a statement with "God," in quick succession, which is either an unintentional result of you overlapping your dialogue o...

This is the story I wrote for the latest Discord writing contest. I rolled "Hisao and Lilly in the girls' dorm" as a pairing so I decided to write a little sequel to the "Evil Lilly" story. Meme/smut ratios are high here, be forewarned. --- An Evening Rendezvous (Naomi x Natsume ...

Okay, this is epic

I don't have a lot to say but I wanted to let you know I laffed

I think you have my feedback on this from the discord. Basically you have made a solid foundation, now I'm hopeful to see where you go with it.

Chapter 5 It takes me a moment to realize that Rika has finally stopped moving. I hear one last groan of contentment before she collapses, laying atop me with her face alongside mine and her breath hot on my ear. I wait a moment to see if she’s going to start again… nope. Guess she’s finally had he...

Chapter 4 Rika obliges my kiss for a moment but she clearly isn’t into it. She pulls her face away before it can go anywhere. “Ah, sorry if I…” I start. “Don’t fucking apologize,” she snaps. Right. Apologizing probably makes me weak or something. I start to wrap an arm around her back then yank it ...

Chapter 3 Time passes. I don’t really process what happened in Rika’s room. I’m trying not to process it. When it forces its way into my awareness every so often, I try to convince myself that it’s for the best, that now I’m just rid of her. That doesn’t really work. Most of the time I keep my mind...

Chapter 2 Rika kept to her promise—same time, same place. Same thing . After the first “date” we just sort of parted ways without saying much else. I was at a loss for words and she seemed to prefer it that way. I thought we might talk more on the second outing, maybe get to know each other a littl...