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by Hanako Fancopter
Sat Aug 03, 2019 12:06 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (New NSFW Art 2/22)
Replies: 1207
Views: 1182528

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 7/30)

Man Sockey's dad is a jerk. Maeda has been built up as the villain of this story but he's pretty sympathetic at this point. I mean Saki hit him, not the other way around. Who's really the jerk there? Whereas her dad hasn't gotten as much focus. Maybe he'll be a bigger player going forward.
by Hanako Fancopter
Wed Jul 31, 2019 5:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Aro's Story Thread
Replies: 10
Views: 4212

Re: In Memory of: Lilly

"Past." Not "passed" you :p

Very sweet story. It's nice to see Niji written effectively as a story rather than the name just popping up as a meme or something.
by Hanako Fancopter
Mon Jul 29, 2019 7:54 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
Replies: 585
Views: 519250

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 7/26/19)

"Anal." On Discord earlier Prof was asking what the "mating press" position is :mrgreen: ... *Deep breath* Boy. I've been married for a decade, with four "proof of sex" tokens. Meanwhile, it wasn't but a few months ago that your mind was blown by the concept of a detac...
by Hanako Fancopter
Sun Jul 28, 2019 4:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Lap's One shots & misc - New Jan 3 2023 - "Dashing Through the Snow..."
Replies: 44
Views: 45826

Re: Lap's One shots & misc - New Entry 7-28-19

Swimming seems to be quite popular at Yamaku. I really should've written a pool story by now.... “It sucks dead donkey dorks,” she muttered savagely. “Emi!” I felt my face go bright red at her language. “What? It does. I hate this fucking chair.” I like how Hisao reprimands her for using kiddy words...
by Hanako Fancopter
Sun Jul 28, 2019 4:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
Replies: 585
Views: 519250

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 7/26/19)

AlexFDSR wrote: Sun Jul 28, 2019 4:23 pm
Hanako Fancopter wrote: Sun Jul 28, 2019 1:24 pm Poor Misha is as lost as Hicchan!

I wonder what steps they need to take to rekindle their flame ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
"Anal."
On Discord earlier Prof was asking what the "mating press" position is :mrgreen:
by Hanako Fancopter
Sun Jul 28, 2019 1:24 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
Replies: 585
Views: 519250

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 7/26/19)

Poor Misha is as lost as Hicchan!

I wonder what steps they need to take to rekindle their flame ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
by Hanako Fancopter
Thu Jul 25, 2019 7:50 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Riposte (Rika Story) (Completed)
Replies: 48
Views: 41412

Re: Riposte (Rika Story) (Updated 7-12-19)

Hisao is a distinct character. Who appears in a medium called "visual novel". Visual Novels have certain characteristics like often they have choice points, and if they do there are often good and bad endings. Sometimes the authors do put in little clues for the readers to hint at what ki...
by Hanako Fancopter
Wed Jul 24, 2019 11:31 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Riposte (Rika Story) (Completed)
Replies: 48
Views: 41412

Re: Riposte (Rika Story) (Updated 7-12-19)

Nooooo don't compare my fic to Mendacium LOL But yeah what you are saying is something I agreed with in Oddball's comments, that the story does not start off properly and does not effectively create its premise. Hisao does not create any good memories with Rika to justify why he would put up with he...
by Hanako Fancopter
Wed Jul 24, 2019 1:28 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Riposte (Rika Story) (Completed)
Replies: 48
Views: 41412

Re: Riposte (Rika Story) (Updated 7-12-19)

Okay, first of all, in the Kenji ending Hisao is not "rejecting" other social interaction. Kenij is the only one to ask, so he decides to spend the time with him instead of staying cooped up in his room, which is arguably the more sociable of two options. Including the Meta, going around ...
by Hanako Fancopter
Wed Jul 24, 2019 8:37 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Riposte (Rika Story) (Completed)
Replies: 48
Views: 41412

Re: Riposte (Rika Story) (Updated 7-12-19)

The Kenji end involves Hisao rejecting any chance of normal social interaction in favor of spending time exclusively with the most dysfunctional person he has met and the one whom he seems to like the least, on the school roof away from anyone else, and swigging down whiskey while he's got a bad hea...
by Hanako Fancopter
Tue Jul 23, 2019 1:57 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Riposte (Rika Story) (Completed)
Replies: 48
Views: 41412

Re: Riposte (Rika Story) (Updated 7-12-19)

I don't see how you can deny that Hisao at least makes some questionable decisions regarding sex. But if you legitimately think his judgment is sound in every route/path regarding sex then fair enough I guess. He does, but so does every other single character in the game. I don't consider that a de...
by Hanako Fancopter
Tue Jul 23, 2019 8:26 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Riposte (Rika Story) (Completed)
Replies: 48
Views: 41412

Re: Riposte (Rika Story) (Updated 7-12-19)

Oh man another detailed review on the same day--once again thanks for your insight. Even if it's much more negative than Feurox's! Where does that even come from? It feels like you just went "well, she's the leading lady so Hisao has to be attracted to her," without giving us any reason wh...
by Hanako Fancopter
Sun Jul 21, 2019 6:24 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Riposte (Rika Story) (Completed)
Replies: 48
Views: 41412

Re: Riposte (Rika Story) (Updated 7-12-19)

Very thoughtful feedback Feurox, I really appreciate it. 2) I'm not hugely fond of 'Smut', which, you preface this route with a warning of. I was pleasantly surprise by how integral the sexual content was to this story however. But I think it's important to realise that I've entered this story with ...
by Hanako Fancopter
Mon Jul 15, 2019 5:12 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: NuclearStudent's Cursed Zone
Replies: 46
Views: 22398

Re: Contest Entry: "Burnt Woman Burns Body"

Well then. That was a thing. It's actually pretty effective as a post-apocalyptic survival horror piece. It's just.... so far removed from Katawa Shoujo. But pretty good for what it is!
by Hanako Fancopter
Sat Jul 13, 2019 12:25 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Riposte (Rika Story) (Completed)
Replies: 48
Views: 41412

Re: Riposte (Rika Story) (Updated 7-12-19)

That's what I'm saying, you're complaining that he's not "in character," but I have no idea what he is "supposed" to be in this sense aside from a boring audience stand-in Like I said, you don't know who he's supposed to be. Basically you're making up a new character and calling...