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- Fri Jun 22, 2018 4:34 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: An Unusual Friendship (Misha x Hanako; Complete)
- Replies: 143
- Views: 133058
Re: An Unusual Friendship (Misha x Hanako)
I felt as if there was a bit missing at the beginning of the chapter, but after rereading the end of the previous one, I can guess what it is... I went and matched my description of the scene very closely with the details from the game to try and make it clear, but this chapter explains it directly...
- Thu Jun 21, 2018 10:35 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A Day In the Life
- Replies: 14
- Views: 5718
Re: A Day In the Life
This was fun to read, I like your main character (but damn she did that one dude dirty calling him out in front of the whole club). It's a refreshing change from having Hisao as the POV. Double refreshing for having pretty much a full cast of OCs who still feel very appropriate to Katawa Shoujo. You...
- Thu Jun 21, 2018 9:48 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
- Replies: 1945
- Views: 974365
Re: Yamaku Book Club (20180611 'Lost Opportunities')
Heartbreak Don't really care for this one, Hisao is just pitiful and it goes straight into some fairly forced (IMO) melodrama. I think I have a bias against a deeply unlikeable male protagonist who does the woe is me routine to such an extent. Still could've been good if it continued but there's on...
- Thu Jun 21, 2018 12:52 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Which song moved you the most?
- Replies: 143
- Views: 135798
Re: Which song moved you the most?
Painful History of course.
- Tue Jun 19, 2018 8:01 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Student Council Sessions: Love and War
- Replies: 8
- Views: 4883
Re: Student Council Sessions: Love and War
I like it! I think there are not enough fics that focus on the interactions between the girls as opposed to Hisao x whichever one of them. I see how Hanako slips under everyone's radar and isn't considered a threat even though she got the original "cute" comment. She's gonna sneak off with...
- Mon Jun 18, 2018 11:23 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Shizune's "Good" Ending -- Sad or Happy?
- Replies: 29
- Views: 20988
Re: Shizune's "Good" Ending -- Sad or Happy?
Hisao thought that Emi was pushing him away, and because the story is told from his perspective, the audience is made sympathetic to it. I don't think it's necessarily the correct perspective, or the only lens through which to view things. What I saw was Hisao pushing something and making an issue o...
- Mon Jun 18, 2018 8:16 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Shizune's "Good" Ending -- Sad or Happy?
- Replies: 29
- Views: 20988
Re: Shizune's "Good" Ending -- Sad or Happy?
You guys don't give Emi enough credit IMO. I'd consider her one of the most mature, possibly the very most. The beginning of her relationship with Hisao is the closest to how these things start IRL; she gives him a bunch of obvious signals then just goes "I like you, kiss me already," no a...
- Mon Jun 18, 2018 1:04 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: An Unusual Friendship (Misha x Hanako; Complete)
- Replies: 143
- Views: 133058
Re: An Unusual Friendship (Misha x Hanako)
Next chapter! Might add navigation links soon too. --- Chapter 5: Alternative The next few days passed in a daze. Misha’s whole life felt like performing sign language now—she was just silently going through the motions. She had enough practice that she could translate for Shizune on autopilot durin...
- Thu Jun 14, 2018 8:52 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
- Replies: 1945
- Views: 974365
Re: Yamaku Book Club (20180611 'Lost Opportunities')
Super short, and not a lot happened, so I really don't have much to say. Well-written though.
- Thu Jun 14, 2018 3:31 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
- Replies: 585
- Views: 531899
Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 6/9/18)
She still seems a little unsure as she takes my phone, but she slowly gains confidence as she taps in the phone number. Waiting a few moments for an answer, she begins speaking. “Hello mommy, it's Shicchan~ . Yeah~, I'm borrowing a friend's phone. No, he said it wasn't a problem~.” Man this messed ...
- Wed Jun 13, 2018 12:16 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: An Unusual Friendship (Misha x Hanako; Complete)
- Replies: 143
- Views: 133058
Re: An Unusual Friendship (Misha x Hanako)
Yeah, she'd probably fumble around with her words if she said it in person. I didn't figure that she would stutter or anything like that on a written note, though. I imagined it as something she spent the day thinking about and working herself up to (maybe she even meant to say it in person, but got...
- Wed Jun 13, 2018 12:03 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: An Unusual Friendship (Misha x Hanako; Complete)
- Replies: 143
- Views: 133058
Re: An Unusual Friendship (Misha x Hanako)
Chapter 4: Confession Misha returned to find Shizune hard at work with the paper-sorting, brows furrowed in concentration. She was so focused that she didn’t notice Misha’s re-entry. Misha used the opportunity to sneak around behind her and put her hands over Shizune’s eyes, sliding them up under t...
- Sun Jun 10, 2018 3:46 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
- Replies: 585
- Views: 531899
Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 6/9/18)
I'd like to note that I fully support any and all sweatervest memeing.
- Tue Jun 05, 2018 11:48 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: An Unusual Friendship (Misha x Hanako; Complete)
- Replies: 143
- Views: 133058
Re: An Unusual Friendship (Misha x Hanako)
Glad some people have enjoyed reading it! That really motivates me to continue. I think I'll add previous/next links and a table of contents if I make it to 5 chapters. You just need a good idea, some insp—in-spir-rate? In-spie… Inspiration! I always interpreted Misha's difficulties with long words ...
- Mon Jun 04, 2018 7:03 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
- Replies: 1945
- Views: 974365
Re: Yamaku Book Club (20180528 'The Ties That Bind')
The Ties That Bind : Good and well-written overall. The first sex scene was a bit too graphic for me but maybe some people are into that. I'm not big on raw smut so I don't consider it my place to judge it very well. I liked that it was written from Lilly's perspective, then switches perspectives t...