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The main event of interest, to me, was Misha's little slip regarding her gender preferences. Hisao of course responds as any self respecting boyfriend should i.e. "i support this completely and absolutely." I was wondering when it would come up, as this is around the time in the VN that Mi...

Why is it that in any story that contains lesbians, all other girls turn out to be lesbian as well? I always wondered that... And most of you probably know that I do not have the highest opinion of Lilly from her path in the VN, but even I don't think she would do something like that - even if she ...

Cleaned up a bit more dialogue throughout the last few chapters. --- Chapter 39: Temptation “Waha~, ahh… hit me~!” Misha said, holding her wine glass out expectantly. “…Did you finish that already? I poured it only a moment ago…” Lilly asked. “Whuh? Oh, uhh… hey, missus wine-chan, there you are~!” M...

Yeah this story is.... something. 1. Why is Emi Hanako's friend, to such an extent of traveling overseas for her and such? I'm not sure that they spoke to each other even one time in the VN. Feels like it should've been Lilly in that role. 2. There's no elaboration on why Hanako ended up in Las Vega...

“When you met Akira and I at the Shanghai... "Akira and me" - usually I don't point this one out in spoken language, but this is Lilly, and she always uses correct grammar. Really, Naocchan paid for most of it. I think her parents are rich! :shock: “Aha! See! Vindication!” Akira said. &qu...

Chapter 38: Celebration “Okay, Hacchan~. Everything’s ready! You can come in!” Hanako slowly pushed open the door to Lilly’s room, receiving a light round of applause led by Misha. Given that there were only three people in the room, it wasn’t terribly loud or overbearing, but it still caused her t...

That's a completely different take on Takashi from the ones we're used to. I think his language is a bit over the top, but it's certainly distinctive. Also I wonder how small the Onigiri they made must have been. The standard size ones you can get everywhere in Japan you couldn't eat more than two ...

Thanks for your kind words! --- Chapter 36: Instruction “Okay, Hacchan~! Are you ready, are you ready? I am~! Let’s go!” “I’m a bit ex-excited… is it in the council room?” “Nah~! Shicchan says there’s no sinks or anything, so we have to go back to our kitchen in the dorms.” “That makes sense… I hope...

I actually gave Misha my own real life "disability." I have half my hearing gone in one ear from ear infections as a child. Though I exaggerated a bit with the developmental effects.... I don't speak at max volumes and say "Wahaha~!" all the time :p

Come to think of it, having Misha remember the fight during the conversation that follows might be an simpler fix to make. She dismisses the idea of Hanako being turned away from Lilly far too easily considering what just happened. Having one of them openly notice that Hanako is behaving differentl...

My bad! In the dorm hallway, Misha got on Lilly's nerves right away with the tea comment, and then Hanako insisted that Misha be brought along despite Lilly's displeasure. Which seems a bit dense for her to be honest, with how grave Lilly sounds, I think she's just not wanting to be bossed around b...

I think Mirage meant Chapter 32, not 34. Both examples are a bit tough for me, yes, because I want to create tension in these scenes but don't want to go overboard and write melodramatic blow-ups that break immersion or seem unrealistic/just too much. I tried to create subtext but probably made it t...

Chapter 34: Proposition Misha and Hanako settled into a new routine over the next two weeks. Hanako hadn’t ever talked to Lilly about the night that Lilly angered her, finding it easier to go on without speaking of it. In the meantime, she had replaced Shizune as Misha’s constant companion—Misha ra...

Chapter 33: Reassurance ADULT CONTENT WARNING (towards the end) Hanako put her book down and got up off her bed. The anger had faded a long time ago. It usually went as fast as it came. Then, anxiety would creep steadily in. This time was no different. She’d had it itching away at the back of her h...

“Sure, Naocchan, sure~! Shicchan made me get drinks for us all the time, so~! It’s just like always, wahaha~!” I think you mean 'Natsu-nyan' here. Nice catch. Copy of Copy of Untitled Document (2).docx Can't wait to find out who gifted a laptop to Hanako. Hand-me-down from an orphanage IT upgrade? ...