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Well darn! Thanks for the feedback. I did feel a bit iffy about the gimmick while I was writing it, I wanted to at least try to do it, but I guess I couldn't quite get there. Maybe I'll revise that one at a later date, reduce or eliminate that aspect of it and flesh it out a bit instead. Also, your ...

Yeah the perspective shifts were a bit tricky to think about. Normally I try to stay in one character's POV for a piece/chapter, or at least not switch around too quickly, but I just had to show both sides with that one. --- An Evening Rendezvous (Naomi x Natsume x ...Hisao?) [Slight lewd warning] M...

Yep, it's another one of these. Fair warning that the things I will post in here are likely to be meme/crack fics (even more so than my Misha x Hanako route, for those of you who may consider that to be one). Whatever I post in here is also probably inspired by some joke or another on the Discord (t...

Very good! In my opinion at least. I am crap at poetry so it's cool to see people make good ones.

ayyyyy it's this fic. I wrote a pseudo route as my first post on the forum and now I'm nearly done with it, so! If I can do it, you can! You've already got my feedback, it's a good start IMO. We'll see where it goes!

Short but powerful. All of a sudden found myself tearing up at this fic which is really, really surprising, to say the least. I rarely tear up at anything, much less a random fanfic. I can just imagine this being the epilogue to a Saki route where it would fit beautifully. Very effective at evoking ...

Penultimate chapter. Number 50 will be the end--epilogue may or may not follow, depending on whether or not I feel like it. A major thanks to anyone still reading! The story is pretty much over at this point and I'm just feeling motivated to put a nice little bow on it. --- Chapter 49: Companions “O...

It's canon to me. It wasn't a mistake Saki! (You were on the right path!) [Hisao was the mistake!] Ahem. Excuse me. What I meant to say was, very well done and enjoyable! It left me wanting more, to see both what happened between them after--and right before--this scene, so that means it was effecti...

Well I'd say your English is quite good for a beginner. Not too much to say about the story since it is the very beginning, we'll see how it develops. I'll also remain undecided on your OC until I see more of her, but she's not a Hisao stand-in, so that's nice right off the bat. The one thing I'm un...

Man this was quite a trip. Read one part of it per day for a week. My only comment about the writing is that I think there were more commas than were necessary in many sentences. But that's just a technical nitpick--the storytelling was excellent. The ending is kind of a bummer, but considering what...

ayyyy I like these. The Lilly one is my favorite cause you know..... I like Hanako, and double like lewd Hanako. And triple like yuri Hanako >.> So yeah. Also approve of your portrayal of Lilly as a thot because, well. She is! The third one was weird, in a delightfully fun way. I liked that it set u...

O.o It is interesting to see how much wackier fics were back in the "early days" of this community. To say this one took some liberties would be... an understatement. Enjoyed it though. Definitely enjoyed it. Hard not to love someone that writes Hanako x Rin smut with no shame at all and o...

It feels like the story is just starting at the point when it ends. I don't know that I've seen any fics where Lilly goes back to Japan after leaving, certainly not any that were memorable... might be cool to see. Either way, this one is nice, seeing her come to her senses as reality sets in followi...

Not really sure how I feel about this one. I don't think I dislike it, but I can't say that I particularly enjoyed it either. My lack of interest probably stems from the subject matter. I just don't know if I can get excited about Jigoro as a kid... not the way it was presented here at least. Though...

I suppose I'll post this here--this is a Halloween one-shot I wrote for the KS Discord Halloween contest, set within this fanfic. It's only halfway serious and kind of just a little side story. It did end up winning the contest (somehow) and it's content related to the fic so here it is. --- Bonus C...