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The saddest part of this story; Kenji probably can't see anything on those monitors with his garbage eyesight! I was happy to look over the story for you, it's a fun one.

Makes me wonder how often Emi's legs get stolen lol

Also an important question..... what will happen when Kenji finally completes his mission?!

I think dialogue comes more naturally as you get more comfortable with writing in general. Try to imagine how people talk to each other--usually there's a lot of give and take, suggestion and response, as opposed to two people simply narrating at each other. I don't know if that makes much sense but...

Now wait a minute. Misha got what she always wanted! Don't make it sound like the story has a bad ending after all! Don't hurt the drill princess! :O

I wish I had more to say but the idea of the story written in iambic pentameter just doesn't interest me. I recognize that it took skill and effort to do it, but it simply isn't my thing, so to speak. Still a good meme though.

Ohhh that makes a lot more sense! Absolutely did not know your fic was a tie-in. That's pretty cool and does make me more inclined to read the two fics you linked!

also thanks for the shout out lol

Nice story! It's a bit of a shame it's just a one-shot. There is so much that is implied in the two pairings you make here, the one that is broken, and the way that is broken, but we don't get to see any of it, only the culmination of it. How did Hisao make contact with Hanako again? What kind of pe...

ayyy congrats on what is (i think) your first KS fanfic

And a very well done effort it is! Hits the right notes to evoke a feeling of loss and melancholy. Poor Rin...

Okay, after the first half I wondered why you put a lewd warning on a story like that. I couldn't see how you'd get around to a h-scene from that start... And it really did not work out all that well. That development would have needed a lot more build-up than this one-shot could possibly provide. ...

The latest creation from the yuri lab! Mild lewd warning. --- An Evening Rendezvous (Naomi x Natsume x ...Hisao?) [Slight lewd warning] Mother Knows Best (Hisao x Meiko) [Lewd warning] A Very Unusual Friendship (Lilly x Hanako) [Lewd warning] A Friendly Competition (Misha x Shizune) [Lewd warning] S...

This is a follow-up to my Discord contest story. It is another meme story, shorter and more dank, but I realized there were enough similarities that it could just tie in to that one. --- An Evening Rendezvous (Naomi x Natsume x ...Hisao?) [Slight lewd warning] Mother Knows Best (Hisao x Meiko) [Lewd...

And as promised, here is the epilogue. The final truly last update to this fic! It's satisfying to reach the very end of the end, yet at the same time, it's sad to say farewell for the very last time. But alas, I do think every story has to end, and this one is done. I'm so happy to have shared it w...

It's never too soon to dive into more smut! Beyond The Impossible I notice that Misha keeps saying "Sicchan" instead of "Shicchan," and the other characters call her "Shiina" even though the narration still uses Misha. Wonder if these oddities are due to differences bet...

Evil Lilly strikes again?! I enjoyed the story. I like to think that Shizune knows this isn't something most people would appreciate, but also knows Misha well enough to understand that she will appreciate it.

I do agree, robot Suzu is my headcanon for her now.