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This is not Hisao. This is Running-Joke Man. Hisao does not talk or think like that and the emphasis on the sweatervest is far overdone and never funny.


Always use words for your numbers. Not just sometimes. It reads better.


I know what you said about Lovecraft, but this is a bit too one the ...

I pull on my sick ass sweater vest. I look at myself in Emi's mirror while she gets ready. Man, I look freaking sweet, I love this sweater. ... I know a few other readers who are going to deduct points for that line ;P
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Do people who don't love the sweatervest really exist?! It's so ...

I'm glad you enjoyed it Craftyatom. The Ascent comparison is actually quite ironic, because that's the first fanfiction I read, 6 long years ago.
As for the specifics - I struggled a lot when writing this, sometimes I felt like I was being too descriptive, sometimes I felt like I was being too vague ...

Okay! Well, there wasn't all that much to this story- being mostly just a fluffy slice-of-life fic, but it was very well-written and that is plenty to make it worth reading in my book. I think you have a very good grasp on Emi as a character and the dialogue was very strong (I was also impressed ...

Author Preamble: Hi, I'm Pomf! I'm an avid poster on /ksg/ (Katawa Shoujo General) over on 4chan's /vg/ board. I played Katawa Shoujo when it first released 6 years ago, and have always felt a special connection with Emi. Recently, I was going through a very very low point in my life, and I replayed ...