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And I finally am able to follow up on the replies and comments! Thanks again for the feedback. I think I spoke to Feux about his already. The main thing is with Yuuto's note passing. I do think I went overboard with the elaborate notes. I'll try and correct it on the future. I've applied all the ...

Vygotsky Most days I feel like breakfast is an arbitrary necessity. I’m not sure if it is my medications, or simply my metabolism, but I never feel an overwhelming need to have breakfast. Today is not one of those days. Emi was running with an unearthly determination this morning. The focus and s ...

Act II: A Single Grain of Sand Dealing With The Hand That's Dealt The chirp of the alarm sounds its usual greeting that pulls me from my dreamless slumber. I can still feel Kawana's slender fingertips on my wrist as if they were still there. Stretching my arms as I get to my feet I smile to myself ...

Well since everybody else is being cool and posting their one shots I'd join in with my only one. Just a little diddy I wrote for the Valentines Day competition on the KS Discord. Hope you guys enjoy it in all its saccharine sappiness. The Ritual Beneath the Stars Melt 125g of calcified oil of the ...

For the most part, I love how you handled the cast. Except for Miki. Big Sexy? Snoozu? Gaylord? I pretty much hate your Miki. Not gonna lie Oddball. I thought of you and Mirage when I came up wrote for Miki. Next time I’ll have her speak entirely in 2015 memes. I enjoyed the scene where Misaki and H ...

I kinda like crossovers, when it's well done. So, I'm intrigued. I will look forward to this story with pleasure. For now, it's pretty nice. Thanks for the comment. But I'm curious where you got the crossover part from. I'm guessing you mean Misaki. I briefly played One: Kagayaku Kisetsu e, but ...

Mirage_GSM wrote: ↑Fri Jan 04, 2019 1:38 pm You probably shouldn't have given away that it's about MIsaki. That would have been a good twist for later on...

I had actually thought of that.
However, I like the idea of the Ikuno thing going on, and the reader knowing it is doomed. Maybe I'm just a sadist.

Black Dog I wipe the accumulated condensation from the bathroom mirror. I have to admit, taking a long, proper shower feels rather nice. Ever since I left the hospital, my showering routine has been rather Spartan, consisting of only washing the essential areas to ensure I am not offensive to ...

A Maudlin Smile The incessant chirp of the alarm clock tears me from my slumber. A swift slam of my hand silences its cruel siren call. As I sit up, recollecting my thoughts, I notice I am still in my school uniform from yesterday. I vaguely recall resting my head on the pillow for a moment after ...

The Language of Flowers "Sorry I'm late." I certainly did not expect to find myself laid out in the bed of the nurse's office. Then again I suppose as the Nurse put it, I didn't show very good judgement. I can hear Mai in my head chiding me for being such a blithering idiot. She would likely have ...

Parting the Iron Curtain Well this is an awkward way to start a Thursday. I look at the group assignment Mutou has nonchalantly dropped in front of me, then to the two empty desks to my right. I suppose even if the dynamic duo were here, they would hardly be interested in helping me out. I suppose ...

Remarks: Some of you may have remembered I posted my early attempt at a Misaki route around a year ago. That story has (obviously) been abandoned. Looking back on it, I had become unsatisfied with several aspects of it. These were in relation to the plot and where the story, and Misaki had gone vs ...

I'm sorry, I couldn't read past Chapter 3. The effort put into making Takashi seem like some kind of scumbag just made this massively uncomfortable for me to read (I just dislike when purely negative traits are ascribed to a character). Which is sad, because I was in love with this concept when it ...

Probably the most mature reply to Iwanako's letter I have read in any route, including the original VN. Though she would probably appreciate being adressed by her correct name "Iwan a ko"... I wanted to write Hisao as somebody who has had to grow up way faster than normal. Hence his tendency to ...

Yeah. I think that conversation isn't something you should skip. It feels too important. Also, I think they both get a bit too technical defining their disabilities. As mentioned by not just you, but Mirage_GSM, StilesLong. I completely agree that this need to be addressed. When I first did that ...