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- Tue Nov 06, 2018 9:10 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A Roadside Picnic: Iwanako Pseudoroute
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Re: A Roadside Picnic: Iwanako Pseudoroute
Act Two, Part Two “Um, hi, Hisao.” I can’t believe my eyes; is Iwanako really here? Or is this some trick conjured up from the side effects of my heavy medication? “Iwanako, hi. Uh, have a seat?” What do you even say in a situation like this? Everything I wanted to tell her after that first stay in ...
- Mon Nov 05, 2018 5:02 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A Roadside Picnic: Iwanako Pseudoroute
- Replies: 10
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Re: A Roadside Picnic: Iwanako Pseudoroute
It's not dead, huzzah! Part two is currently being run through with my editors, who have kindly agreed to point out all of the grammatical mistakes I make and run on sentences I use. Sorry for the long break- I go through phases of being really into writing, and really not, and I just happened to ...
- Tue May 29, 2018 6:09 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A Roadside Picnic: Iwanako Pseudoroute
- Replies: 10
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Re: A Roadside Picnic: Iwanako Pseudoroute
Given that the hospital he is in is quite a way from Hisao's hometown it's a bit unlikely that his parents can spend so much time there over several days... or that Iwanako would be able to visit him there. Not sure if you're planning on giving an explanation for that. It's the kind of thing that ...
- Fri May 25, 2018 5:56 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A Roadside Picnic: Iwanako Pseudoroute
- Replies: 10
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Re: A Roadside Picnic: Iwanako Pseudoroute
Act Two, Part One The sound of shuffling feet and an incessant beeping. The clean scent of sterility. A pounding ache in my head… no… everywhere. Where am I? Did I die? My eyes open, only to immediately close as my senses are assaulted with a blinding light coupled with a worsening headache. Sq ...
- Fri May 25, 2018 5:53 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A Roadside Picnic: Iwanako Pseudoroute
- Replies: 10
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A Roadside Picnic: Iwanako Pseudoroute
Hello good people of KS Renai! This is a pretty hefty project I'm taking on that will probably take me a long time to finish, so I apologize for that head of time. Constructive criticisms are always welcome, and I do hope you'll enjoy the story I craft as I make my way through it. This fic takes ...