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I'm glad to see you enjoyed reading it, thanks for the feedback :D . This is my first story writing from a first person perspective so it's a learning curve on not making Kaito seem so robotic, any advice is appreciated so by all means please go over any errors you spotted. I've got other writing pr...

Thanks for your well written feedback. This is my first story written from a first person perspective and I think it's showing a bit :| getting the right balance between Kaitos' mind and showing rather than telling is going to be tricky but your advise has been very helpful. I'm doing a bit of restr...

After discovering Katawa Shoujo for the first time this year, I couldn't help but create a Fanfic for it. CAN YOU BEAR ANOTHER'S PAIN? EDIT: I've restructured the first part of the story as it was rushing ahead far too quickly. The first chapter is different to the first rendition so have another re...