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- Wed Jul 26, 2017 5:22 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Out of Mind
- Replies: 10
- Views: 6299
Re: Out of Mind
I'm glad to see you enjoyed reading it, thanks for the feedback :D . This is my first story writing from a first person perspective so it's a learning curve on not making Kaito seem so robotic, any advice is appreciated so by all means please go over any errors you spotted. I've got other writing ...
- Wed May 31, 2017 6:46 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Out of Mind
- Replies: 10
- Views: 6299
Re: Out of Mind
Thanks for your well written feedback. This is my first story written from a first person perspective and I think it's showing a bit :| getting the right balance between Kaitos' mind and showing rather than telling is going to be tricky but your advise has been very helpful. I'm doing a bit of ...
- Tue May 30, 2017 12:56 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Out of Mind
- Replies: 10
- Views: 6299
Re: Out of Mind
After discovering Katawa Shoujo for the first time this year, I couldn't help but create a Fanfic for it. CAN YOU BEAR ANOTHER'S PAIN? EDIT: I've restructured the first part of the story as it was rushing ahead far too quickly. The first chapter is different to the first rendition so have another ...
- Tue May 30, 2017 12:47 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Out of Mind
- Replies: 10
- Views: 6299