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- Tue Jul 04, 2017 12:08 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: People-Watching: A Naomi Inoue Pseudo-Route
- Replies: 52
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Act 2 - Play Date
I've gotten into a staring contest with myself in the mirror. Should I do something with my hair? Put product in it or something? That would probably look unnatural. It feels stupid to be nervous about a date, especially with someone as easygoing as Naomi, but what can I say? She's hard to read. I d...
- Thu Jun 15, 2017 5:14 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: From Tokyo To Mumbai
- Replies: 13
- Views: 8678
Re: From Tokyo To Mumbai
Very intriguing start Zere! Seems like there are a lot of directions to go with this so it will be interesting to watch unfold.
I think I mentioned before that this premise is making me think of Legion
I think I mentioned before that this premise is making me think of Legion
- Thu May 04, 2017 12:41 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: People-Watching: A Naomi Inoue Pseudo-Route
- Replies: 52
- Views: 36227
Re: People-Watching: A Naomi Inoue Pseudo-Route
Well, not if she wasn't expecting to be challenged in the first place. Really? She accused Naomi of libel and expected her just to take it? Not likely. Well the idea was that it wasn't something she'd planned out, just a reactionary comment she made out of defensiveness without much reasoning behin...
- Thu May 04, 2017 12:25 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: People-Watching: A Naomi Inoue Pseudo-Route
- Replies: 52
- Views: 36227
Re: People-Watching: A Naomi Inoue Pseudo-Route
Still, even if Hisao really went braindead here I'd expect a girl like Naomi to at least call him out on this unenthousiastic response. Rule of thumb: If you get confessed to, and you respond with what boils down to "Yeah, sure" don't expect to get to second base anytime soon :-) Edit: By...
- Tue May 02, 2017 8:54 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: People-Watching: A Naomi Inoue Pseudo-Route
- Replies: 52
- Views: 36227
Re: People-Watching: A Naomi Inoue Pseudo-Route
Really, this chapter felt like you were in a rush to get he relationship started rather than it developing normally. So far the impression I got from Naomi was that she probably is mildly interested in Hisao but not that she'd be so anxious that she'd confess right there. Hisao's reaction was... we...
- Tue May 02, 2017 5:46 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: People-Watching: A Naomi Inoue Pseudo-Route
- Replies: 52
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Act 2 - Two Kids Alone in a Tiny Room
There's a quiet, electronic hum in the computer lab that can make any silence awkward. Natsume is unexpectedly late for lunch, leaving me and Naomi here by ourselves without much to talk about. Given that Naomi is preoccupied with her lunch- slurping noodles directly out of a plastic container with ...
- Mon May 01, 2017 9:09 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: People-Watching: A Naomi Inoue Pseudo-Route
- Replies: 52
- Views: 36227
Re: People-Watching: A Naomi Inoue Pseudo-Route
Okay, I'm away for a weekend and when I come back you've written half a novella's worth of new chapters... Time to catch up... Hahaha, I wish I'd written all this in a weekend. Like I originally mentioned this is a fic I have been updating for some time on FF.net, right now I'm just posting chapter...
- Sun Apr 30, 2017 10:16 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: People-Watching: A Naomi Inoue Pseudo-Route
- Replies: 52
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Act 2 - Inquisition
Today is my fourth consecutive day on the nurse's exercise schedule, which according to him consists of "as much brisk walking as seems productive"- or until I get too tired and frustrated to exert myself, in other words. Credit where it's due, he's definitely committed to accommodating me...
- Sun Apr 30, 2017 3:54 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: People-Watching: A Naomi Inoue Pseudo-Route
- Replies: 52
- Views: 36227
Act 2 - Comedy of Errors
It is usually pretty easy to guess whether Shizune and Misha have shown up to class yet before I even get to the door, which is why I am surprised to find them both situated at their desks first thing in the morning despite a completely quiet classroom. Misha, uncharacteristically, seems to be preoc...
- Sat Apr 29, 2017 8:21 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: People-Watching: A Naomi Inoue Pseudo-Route
- Replies: 52
- Views: 36227
Re: People-Watching: A Naomi Inoue Pseudo-Route
Wait. So this is not art club Takashi who's in the same home room as Hisao and the girls? All this time that's who I thought you were talking about when you mentioned Takashi. Oh damn no, haha, it's a completely different person. Sorry for the confusion. That's simply my mistake; when I originally ...
- Sat Apr 29, 2017 3:03 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: People-Watching: A Naomi Inoue Pseudo-Route
- Replies: 52
- Views: 36227
Act 2 - Deadlines
I've been staring at the ceiling for I don't know how long. That's something I used to do in the hospital, especially early on, before I got used to being there. It depresses me for no good reason. It feels like the whole week has breezed right past me- my entire perception of time is distorted righ...
- Sat Apr 29, 2017 3:02 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: People-Watching: A Naomi Inoue Pseudo-Route
- Replies: 52
- Views: 36227
Act 2 - Initiation
Act 2: Observation Monday morning has always been the most trying time of the week, but I can't remember the last time I ever felt like this waking up. I could chalk it up to the fact that I haven't adapted to my class schedule yet, but really it's the festival's fault. If I only knew why I thought...
- Fri Apr 28, 2017 2:16 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: People-Watching: A Naomi Inoue Pseudo-Route
- Replies: 52
- Views: 36227
Act 1 - It Takes All Kinds
"…Yeah, you should check the festival out." It seems like a harmless suggestion to me, but even still I'm not surprised to see Kenji overreact to it, groaning and throwing his face into his hands. "Agh, no, no! I can't do it. They'll eat me alive out there, I know it." He remains...
- Wed Apr 26, 2017 2:44 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: People-Watching: A Naomi Inoue Pseudo-Route
- Replies: 52
- Views: 36227
Act 1 - Social Circles
"Before you all leave, I expect the answers for those problems by Monday." That's no doubt every student's least favorite ending to a day of class, especially considering the frantic last-minute festival preparations everyone is bound to be doing today. Mutou is obviously aware of this, bu...
- Wed Apr 26, 2017 2:44 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: People-Watching: A Naomi Inoue Pseudo-Route
- Replies: 52
- Views: 36227
Act 1 - In the Newsroom
Over the course of two days, I've managed to set everyone's expectations unreasonably high for me, and then proceed to immediately fail to meet them all. After the mess I made of myself on the track this morning, it looks like I am going to end up either as the unmotivated whipping boy of the Studen...