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- Fri Jun 02, 2017 12:30 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Infinite Promises - A Lilly Epilogue [updated 6/8]
- Replies: 51
- Views: 30731
Re: Infinite Promises - A Lilly Epilogue [updated 6/2]
Ahh!! This is the first time in a fic I've actually loved Hisao's parents, this is great! It's weird to see Lilly faltering, even if it is just in her dream. KS and many fics continue with the 'perfect and proper' shtick. This is a good change up from that. Also, so much art holy crap!! A cover piec...
- Fri May 19, 2017 11:06 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Completed)
- Replies: 1243
- Views: 1216511
Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 5/18)
Another great chapter man. This one was really deep, our first time really getting a look at Saki's past and it definitely struck a chord with me. The description of everything surrounding her past was so accurate and vivid, just incredible work Eurobeat!
- Fri May 12, 2017 11:50 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Can You Accept Your Fate? - Saki Pseudo Route (Ch. 8, 15/02)
- Replies: 76
- Views: 52693
Re: Can You Accept Your Fate? - Saki Pseudo Route (Ch. 8, 15
Congratulations from one engineer to another! Enjoy the post-graduation celebrations!
- Tue May 02, 2017 4:59 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: People-Watching: A Naomi Inoue Pseudo-Route
- Replies: 52
- Views: 38004
Re: People-Watching: A Naomi Inoue Pseudo-Route
Hey man, glad to see you're putting this on the forums! Always love your work!
- Wed Apr 12, 2017 11:05 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 4/8)
- Replies: 74
- Views: 57163
Re: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 4
Another great chapter of course. I wonder how Hisao will show Natty how he feels.
As for the Mutou/high school debacle, I definitely had a teacher that was EXACTLY like that in high school.
As for the Mutou/high school debacle, I definitely had a teacher that was EXACTLY like that in high school.
- Tue Mar 28, 2017 9:59 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Flutter - Level Thirty Eight: Desync [18/9/24]
- Replies: 330
- Views: 231152
Re: Flutter - Level Twenty One: Footsies [25/3/17]
“Didja miss me?” Absolutely, Sharp :wink: New Hisao Plus. Super Hisao II Turbo. Don’t ruin this tender moment by saying those out loud, Rika… She definitely should have said these out loud. :lol: Great chapter of course and welcome back Sharp! Hope everything is on the right track for you now! Also...
- Sun Mar 19, 2017 2:59 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 4/8)
- Replies: 74
- Views: 57163
Re: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 3
It's about damn time Hisao! For a second there I thought he wasn't going to confess in this chapter and I was really disappointed, but I'm happy to say I'm very wrong. Another great chapter, InSaiyan, perhaps my favorite thus far because it contains such an important plot point. Although it will be ...
- Sun Mar 19, 2017 2:39 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Completed)
- Replies: 1243
- Views: 1216511
Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 1/19)
By that I did not mean to suggest to write a fluff piece or something of the sort, but rather to write something short that sets things up for later as opposed to doing a crucial scene right now.
- Fri Mar 17, 2017 10:07 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Completed)
- Replies: 1243
- Views: 1216511
Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 1/19)
Hope you get all settled in Eurobeat! Definitely take care of that stuff first before writing.
As for the chapter go with what you feel, you have good instincts, although it may be easier to buy yourself some time to think ahead and just do another Yamaku chapter. Just a thought.
As for the chapter go with what you feel, you have good instincts, although it may be easier to buy yourself some time to think ahead and just do another Yamaku chapter. Just a thought.
- Mon Mar 13, 2017 1:52 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 4/8)
- Replies: 74
- Views: 57163
Re: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 3
I take a nearby seat and scoot up to the table, turning to the girls beside of me before speaking up. I think that should be "to the girls beside me" or "to the girls to the side of me." But I'm no grammar nazi. :D I like this chapter a lot, I wonder what the conversation was ac...
- Fri Mar 10, 2017 7:34 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 4/8)
- Replies: 74
- Views: 57163
Re: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 3
Also, not even lbelling the door to the girls' locker room seems excessively lax *labelling :wink: Also, I think in the text InSaiyan mentions that Hisao does not check what is on the other side of the door, so it may be the pool or the locker room. I could have misread that though. Apparently I wa...
- Fri Mar 10, 2017 2:39 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 4/8)
- Replies: 74
- Views: 57163
Re: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 3
Nice chapter, short and sweet, although I can definitely see this setting up a few things for the future with Hisao.
Not to tread on Mirage's territory but there was a couple cases of mixed up tenses.
Not to tread on Mirage's territory but there was a couple cases of mixed up tenses.
- Sun Mar 05, 2017 7:24 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 4/8)
- Replies: 74
- Views: 57163
Re: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 3
I'm right there with you, Hisao. InSaiyan is a cruel cruel man.InSaiyan wrote:I wonder what she was about to say? Maybe it was nothing.
Another great chapter, the description of the dancing was done fairly well! Hopefully they'll get to talk more later in the day.
- Fri Mar 03, 2017 12:26 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 4/8)
- Replies: 74
- Views: 57163
Re: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 3
I like this chapter a lot! I feel like if Naomi wasn't third-wheeling they would have kissed... Dangit Naomi
One error:
One error:
Should be sight not site.InSaiyan wrote:The two are out of site now, leaving me alone in the courtyard with my thoughts.
- Mon Feb 27, 2017 3:41 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hindsight (5 Epilogues - Complete)
- Replies: 46
- Views: 23906
Re: Hindsight (5 Epilogues - Complete)
I probably wouldn't have repeated all of Kenji's speech again. It's nice that it seems to provide a common feature for each arc - like Iwanako's letter does in the VN - but in the VN it is also not included in its entirety in each route. As it was I found myself skipping those paragraphs as soon as...