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“Hi guys!” Emi’s high voice rings out through the small crowd of people stepping from the bus. She rushes past everyone and skids to a stop in front of Rin and I, her large bag left on the sidewalk by the bus. “How have you been!? Did you remember to eat? And Sleep?” She bombards Rin with questions, ...

Mirage_GSM wrote:almost no Rin

True, I have more planned, just wanted to lay some groundwork first.

Mirage_GSM wrote:Pacing issues aside this was still a pretty solid start.

Thanks!

Just finished re-reading Rin's route. I think there should be more, so I'm making some more. Rin is quite hard to write, so constructive criticism would be appreciated. Remember that it's bad luck to comment on art in progress. Maybe the risk is acceptable to you. More parts to come. Part 1 (This ...

It returns! \o/

Great to see you back Sharp

It took me long enough to read the whole thing but I'm finally caught up! Looking forward to the next part.

We paid, like hell was I letting pay for me, and left to grab dessert.

Like hell I was letting him pay for me?

Loving this story, keep it up!