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Wow Sharp, that's one hell of a return. The chapter came out great! I love the parallel between the first line in the chapter and the author's notes, and yes, we did miss you.

Welcome back,
--Dash

Well worth the wait.

Welcome back,
--Dash

Sorry to hear about the lonesome Christmas, but if it results in progress for one of the two active Saki routes...well, thanks.

Good luck

No worries on the delay, but many thanks for the update. Good luck at the convention!

--Dash

Why did it have to be her? I swear I was joking when I said that after last chapter. But now I know why you didn't respond last time, oops. “Thank god… I thought I was the only one.” So, I had been wondering when this issue was going to show up. I really like the way you wrote it into the story here ...

Glad to see you're back, looking forward to the next chapter!

Thanks for sharing,
--Dash

Argh, my spelling and grammar is going to shit, especially when I'm on my pain meds. Woof. Remember when I made no spelling errors? It happens to the best of us, painkillers or not. I wouldn't worry, catching typos is one of the benefits of posting your story here, right? Besides, I noticed that it ...

hand on his friend’s shoulder to reassure you. reassure her feel likeI ran feel like I... y-your not in a sports club? y-you're “What’s Albania like?” Oh my god, Hisao, you dodged a bullet with this one… I laughed, out loud. A lot. Now I'm embarrassed even though I'm in my own house all alone, dammi ...

to let solo this boss — to let you ----- A curious paper bomb… Waiting to be triggered trigger warning ----- Hisao is going to be one of the toughest fights of his life. be in one ----- two figures walk hand-in-hand and yet, “Huh? What, no, me and ‘Nako aren’t a… thing.” I gotta admit, this is one t ...

So, after rewriting this message several times, I think I'll just keep it short and simple:
Thank you so much for working so hard to share this story with us!

--Dash

I had more swearing in Monomyth certainly but that because I wanted to focus more on them being teenagers than on their disabilities (though I suppose Japanese kids wouldn't do it as much) I was actually referring to her character not the fic. Rika tends to keep it pg-13 (or regional equivalent ...

found a typo...maybe Just… keeping breathing.” He says just keep breathing? See? Yeah, we will do. yeah, will do? 'I’m just worried with the lightning earlier and getting this excited… Could be bad' could end badly? It's probably correct as is, but the sentence structure bugs me for some reason. “Sor ...

Don't worry Sharp, after 15 chapters of great writing and Rika being adorable, we'll be coming back whether you add cliff-hangers or not. Even those who have short attention spans likely won't go anywhere thanks to your rapid release schedule. The only difference is whether I'm glaring at you with ...

FINALLY a post where I'm not about to go to sleep! Thanks Sharp =) His arm relaxes as his other raises it to [] meet his dropping head. ...as his other raises to meet his dropping head? Also, did you mean 'drooping'? Or is it just another instance of my narrow-minded lack of experience with ...

Good chapter, Rika's still adorable.

Damn your cliffhangers!

Gotta get to work (already late, oops) but I'm REALLY looking forward to next time.
As always, thanks for sharing,
--Dash