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by Trufflez
Tue Feb 09, 2016 4:41 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Chasing the Future - Post Shizune Good Ending (Complete)
Replies: 17
Views: 7840

Re: Chasing the Future - Post Shizune Good Ending (Complete)

Glad you enjoyed reading AtD, and I'll have to say I wrote it with the aid of a fair bit of Kenji's hard stuff! :)

Perhaps his reality does overlap with ours; it's just that he says the things we refuse to say—he sees the things we aren't supposed to see, and hence stands like a shaman between us ...
by Trufflez
Tue Feb 09, 2016 3:28 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Chasing the Future - Post Shizune Good Ending (Complete)
Replies: 17
Views: 7840

Re: Chasing the Future - Post Shizune Good Ending (Complete)


So did I, once... [LINK] — Hisao's daughter and Kenji's son. :)
Heh, After the Dream was actually one of the first KS fan fictions I read. I thoroughly enjoyed it, but damn if I didn't need a drink afterwards...

Shizune is my favorite girl (if you can't tell :D ) and your take on her is pretty ...
by Trufflez
Mon Feb 08, 2016 1:45 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Chasing the Future - Post Shizune Good Ending (Complete)
Replies: 17
Views: 7840

Re: Chasing the Future - Post Shizune Good Ending (Complete)

Sorry if it seemed a bit corny, but I’m a sucker for happy endings.
As long as you realize it yourself :-)

Aside from the general cornyness it was quite good.

Two minor comments:
- When Hisao surprises Shizune before his proposal she signs something before turning around . Meaning he wouldn't be ...
by Trufflez
Mon Feb 08, 2016 10:13 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Chasing the Future - Post Shizune Good Ending (Complete)
Replies: 17
Views: 7840

Re: Chasing the Future - Post Shizune Good Ending (Complete)

brythain wrote:That's sweet. All the nice stuff and not a hint of sad stuff anywhere! Yes, it is a little corny, but it isn't corny -and- incompetent. I liked it. :)
Thanks! I figured that there are already more than enough depressing or bittersweet fanfictions on this board. :lol:
by Trufflez
Mon Feb 08, 2016 9:43 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Chasing the Future - Post Shizune Good Ending (Complete)
Replies: 17
Views: 7840

Re: Chasing the Future - Post Shizune Good Ending (Complete)

Once we reach classroom 3-2, I knock on the door. A very recognizable male voice answers.

“Come in.” We enter the empty classroom and face the teacher, who is currently organizing some papers. He puts them down, folds his hands together, and smiles at us. His longish brown hair sways gently from ...
by Trufflez
Mon Feb 08, 2016 9:41 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Chasing the Future - Post Shizune Good Ending (Complete)
Replies: 17
Views: 7840

Re: Chasing the Future - Post Shizune Good Ending (Complete)

Bonus Epilogue!

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Yamaku High School. I stand in front of the gates, nervously anticipating my first day here. I really wish Masumi would show up already. The bell should be ringing soon. Finally, I see her mom’s car driving up the street. I wave. Masumi gets out and we hug. Behind her, I see ...
by Trufflez
Mon Feb 08, 2016 9:38 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Chasing the Future - Post Shizune Good Ending (Complete)
Replies: 17
Views: 7840

Re: Chasing the Future - Post Shizune Good Ending (Complete)

Unfortunately, we don’t get to talk for very long, since Lilly and Hanako have to get back to work. At this point Misha is beginning to look tired and I myself am feeling a bit worn out. When I ask her if we can go somewhere away from the crowd to relax before heading back home, she happily complies ...
by Trufflez
Mon Feb 08, 2016 9:35 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Chasing the Future - Post Shizune Good Ending (Complete)
Replies: 17
Views: 7840

Re: Chasing the Future - Post Shizune Good Ending (Complete)

Misha doesn’t seem very interested in playing games, however. She’s pulling me again past quite a few stalls. Perhaps this is a game, revenge for all the times I used to drag her around? The thought amuses me. She really has changed. Misha suddenly stops, almost causing me to lose my balance. I ...
by Trufflez
Mon Feb 08, 2016 9:32 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Chasing the Future - Post Shizune Good Ending (Complete)
Replies: 17
Views: 7840

Re: Chasing the Future - Post Shizune Good Ending (Complete)

Misha seems eager to skip most of the stalls in town, despite my dissatisfaction. She apparently wants to get to Yamaku as quickly as possible. I can’t blame her, although we’re missing out on some cool things, not to mention delicious fried food. We finally reach the school gates and take a minute ...
by Trufflez
Mon Feb 08, 2016 9:30 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Chasing the Future - Post Shizune Good Ending (Complete)
Replies: 17
Views: 7840

Re: Chasing the Future - Post Shizune Good Ending (Complete)

Misha’s train arrives right on time. People huddle their way out and I keep my eyes open for a bobbing pink head. Strangely, I can’t find it anywhere. Maybe she fell asleep. Just as I’m about to go looking for her, a familiar face jumps into my line of sight and hugs me.

[Ah, I see. You’re back to ...
by Trufflez
Mon Feb 08, 2016 9:28 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Chasing the Future - Post Shizune Good Ending (Complete)
Replies: 17
Views: 7840

Chasing the Future - Post Shizune Good Ending (Complete)

I recently finished KS for the second time and after reading some fanfiction here, decided to create my own headcannon the other night. I don’t think my writing is all that good, but I’m going to share it anyway. There are probably a fair amount of grammatical errors as well, so I hope you don’t ...