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Interesting! I'm looking forward to where you go with this.

There are a couple places where you swapped tense or mis-typed/spelled, but I don't feel it really detracted from the story that hard. Still, I'd recommend finding a proofreader or editor to help out.

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I know it'll be compared to Developments. It's kind of hard not to with that being such a great story! I intend on it being a more pure Emi/Hisao, though, without the third wheel (sorry!) of Hanako, and the bouncing back and forth of Hisao between the two.

Im going to try my hardest to make my own ...

Thanks for your input. Things will definitely flesh out as the story progresses! I chose to start from the point of Lilly leaving because it leaves a lot of time to progress, while not having a whole lot of time pass where the girls who were all interested in Hisao would lose those feelings ...

Hi! I'm new here, but after binging on various fanfics for the past week, I've decided to start my own!
This story takes place as if Hisao failed to stop Lilly from leaving Japan, ending up in the hospital, but with.. no Lilly.
I hope you enjoy, as it's my first real attempt at writing anything ...