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Rest assured though, it does star Shizune and she is a maid. The how and the why you really need to see for yourself. Of course, this is yet another story that suffers from being abandoned before anything was fully explained or fleshed out, but it was off to a really good start. Welcome to me and ...

Or request people to play their fucking music before tossing them out while they're listening to it.

The way you mentioned Shizune was out of character for her. Prior to Lilly leaving for Scotland, she did all the work for her class and acted as though she were a proper member of the Student Council. Seeing Lilly work hard again, Shizune, in an act of kindness, gave Lilly some documents she needed ...

Agreed. Mutou makes a lot more sense.

Zerebos wrote:This is very unique continuation of Hanako's good end, not something I've seen before. I really like it, it definitely seems like a real possibility in canon too!

Someone has apparently not read Sisterhood.

I'll keep that in mind for the future.

As always, thanks a lot for helping me improve my writing, Mirage! Really appreciate it! My new goal is to release the next chapter with no errors for you to find. That would be one hell of an achievement :P . See you next time! Good luck with that. Mirage is the king of all Grammar Nazis. :twisted:

Fair point.

Mirage_GSM wrote:It's a wonder Lilly slept through that
Or has she...

DUN! DUN!! DUN!!!

Joking aside, he has a point, since Lilly's sense of hearing is sharper than most of the main characters.

only a select few students have disabilities that do not interfere with heavy-duty activities. Just looking at Hisao's class I think the student not cleared for wightlifting would be Ritsu, Akio, Misaki, maybe Naomi - and most of all Hisao... Don't forget Suzu! I dont think a narcoleptic should he ...

This part is very sweet. When I was reading the scene when Shizune was comforting Kano (not THAT kind of comforting) I had the song "Everything's Alright" from To the Moon in my head.

If it's in first person, then it'd be "I" instead of "you." Also, those examples? Those raise an eyebrow more than they make you laugh.

Nice start. Only a few typos, but you misspelled Mutou twice. A few other things: Hisao wouldn't wear sweaterwests to classes. Yamaku has uniforms for that. So Emi wouldn't have seen him in one at that point either. Heterochromia is okay, but does she really need another disability in addition to ...

How about the collab fanfiction, Katawa Aniki, which centers around 2 new characters and how they come across Hanako and Shizune, who are more fleshed out here than in the VN itself, by Popo Popo and Diet Kane?

Miki: "You know what they say: a lady on the street, a freak in bed.”

That is scary, knowing Lilly in the VN.