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- Fri May 20, 2016 6:23 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Tragic Tale of Iwanako
- Replies: 45
- Views: 24634
Re: The Tragic Tale of Iwanako
Is it time to start dredging up old concept characters that never made it into the game and start writing stories centered around them?
- Wed May 11, 2016 9:23 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Housewarming" (18+) 09/11/24
- Replies: 380
- Views: 266989
Re: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Morning Routine" 12/5/16
I think you did a great job of describing just how painful doing something as simple as getting out of bed can be for someone with arthritis. I'd really love to see a successful Naomi/Natsume route that doesn't just get abandoned after a while.
- Wed May 11, 2016 4:37 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Completed)
- Replies: 1250
- Views: 1226993
Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 5/11)
This was a nice early birthday surprise
- Thu Apr 21, 2016 9:13 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Housewarming" (18+) 09/11/24
- Replies: 380
- Views: 266989
Re: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Snowblind Finale" 22/4/16
I think that wrapped things up nicely. It's always nice to see an update from you, considering how slow the forums have gotten lately.
- Thu Mar 31, 2016 11:26 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
- Replies: 585
- Views: 534562
Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 4-1-16)
I had to do a double take when I saw this at the top of the forum to make sure I wasn't seeing things. I tore through this chapter in like 15 minutes, so I think I need to go back and re-read the chapter and the ones before it so I can refresh my memory, but this is a nice return to form. Glad to ...
- Thu Mar 24, 2016 2:40 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Housewarming" (18+) 09/11/24
- Replies: 380
- Views: 266989
Re: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Snowblind Part II" 24/3/16
So far, I like this story. It's a shame you've killed Hisao off in the least dignified way possible in your earlier story. Also, it seems like in this, Hisao is a lot closer to Taro's gang than you portrayed him in Monomyth.
- Thu Feb 25, 2016 10:49 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 4/16!)
- Replies: 175
- Views: 103447
Re: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 2/22!)
I understand where you're coming from now, but I think this chapter might've been better (not that it wasn't good already) if you'd included Hisao's reasoning for not being mad at Misha.
- Tue Feb 23, 2016 12:21 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 4/16!)
- Replies: 175
- Views: 103447
Re: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 2/22!)
Jaysus... That's certainly something... This is one of those times where I'm both utterly surprised and unsurprised. This story is taking an interesting turn and I'm certainly up for the ride. Exactly this. It caught me by surprise at first, but then I realized Shizune would be the type of person ...
- Mon Feb 22, 2016 8:05 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 4/16!)
- Replies: 175
- Views: 103447
Re: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 2/22!)
Like Azumeow said, I definitely couldn't see that one coming. I've even read FluffAndCrunch's collection of after-KS stories and I still didn't see it coming. Well done. With this latest chapter, I feel like a lot of the questions I've had about this story have been answered. Edit : While I was ...
- Sun Feb 21, 2016 11:07 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Flutter - Level Thirty Nine: Rage Quit [13/10/24]
- Replies: 336
- Views: 235039
Re: Flutter - Level Two: Water Hazard [21/2/16]
Hm. The more you know.Those are the same thing. [LINK]
- Sun Feb 21, 2016 8:19 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Flutter - Level Thirty Nine: Rage Quit [13/10/24]
- Replies: 336
- Views: 235039
Re: Flutter - Level Two: Water Hazard [21/2/16]
senpai*Please forgive me, sempai
- Sun Feb 14, 2016 2:56 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Flutter - Level Thirty Nine: Rage Quit [13/10/24]
- Replies: 336
- Views: 235039
Re: Flutter - Level One: The Haunted Hall [13/2/18]
I'm cautiously optimistic about this. The only Rika route with likable characters I've ever read was abandoned before it could even hit its stride, so I'm hoping you'll either see this through to the end or kill it off before I can get my hopes up. Hoitash was right about most interpretations of ...
- Sat Feb 06, 2016 2:24 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Housewarming" (18+) 09/11/24
- Replies: 380
- Views: 266989
Re: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "The New Boy" 6/2/16
I'm beginning to wonder if you and Brythain will ever run out of ideas.
- Fri Jan 22, 2016 3:27 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 4/16!)
- Replies: 175
- Views: 103447
Re: Act 2, Chapter 5 - Drinks (Before Dinner)
Interesting choice of words when talking about Shizune.Puncyclopedia wrote:And yet, this. I can almost hear her voice in my head, criticizing me. Asking me why I’m not willing to see her if I’ve forgiven her. It’s a question that is perfectly logical to her, and yet would make no sense to 95% of the population.
- Wed Dec 23, 2015 8:10 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Miki: Fragments (Complete)
- Replies: 206
- Views: 155470
Re: Miki: Fragments (Ch.34 Posted 23rd December 2015)
I think you meant "resplendent." There's some other mistakes too, but this one was the most glaring to me for some reason.Gajzla wrote: It would be hard to picture Mrs Komaki - respondent in her jewels and fancy dress