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Street Fighter - Yamaku Edition :-) I always enjoy seeing a different take on characters than what they usually are like, so this ticks all the right boxes. I do agree with Scramblers that the colloquialisms are a bit over the top... Imo, less would be more in this case. I do enjoy the harder edge ...

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Anyway, the medical stuff aside, those were really great additions to the main story - and it feels as if more happened in those two or three days than in the two or three months before that. :-) The medical stuff was always going to let me down but I tried my best with it. I especially appreciate ...

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~ Saki ~ “Up and at ’em, Saki.” A gentle wake-up call brings me out of the deepest sleep I’ve had in a while. I rub my eyes and my vision focuses on the mass of white and green standing over me. “ Taro ? What time is it?” I wince as I rise, my body not wanting to wake up just yet. The boy who offer...

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So, it has been a while since I read the start of this series. I know I should restart from the beginning, but right now I'm trying to catch up with all the stuff that was posted since I was last here, so that will have to wait. It does mean that I don't really remember OCs like Fuuka, though... Ge...

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As much as she wants to break away from her past life, there was always going to be something that inextricably tied her to the past and if she has to choose; why not make it a good memory. Maybe the only good memory.

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~ Fuuka ~ Jiro gives me the tour of his room but it’s not all that different to most of the other dorm rooms I’ve seen, barring the odd decoration and a very interesting piece of furniture. “You have a futon instead of a bed?” I ask, curious about the large sofa-like piece of furniture where most o...

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Snapping SIM card was a very powerful gesture. It's one of the many steps to distance herself from the past and make sure she can't fall into old habits. Hoh boy, The fallout from those messages is definitely gonna make its rounds. There's no going back now Saki, you're all in now. Redemption arc i...

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Hot damn, what an emotionally resonant story! Genuinely got choked up during Shiina and Shizune's conversation. Fantastic work on this, Lap!

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~ Fuuka ~ “I want you to know - with all the affection I have for you as Rika’s boyfriend - that you are fucking stupid , Hisao.” I stare at Hisao in utter disbelief. He attempts to defend himself but with his mouth full of a bread-y lunch, he has no choice but to sit there and take my righteous an...

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~ Hisao ~ “So what happened in there, Fuuka?” I ask gently, crouching down to meet Fuuka’s eyeline, even though she tries her best not to meet mine. Fuuka grips her hands together tightly, leaning against her knees, head hung low. Rui pats my shoulder as she enters Rika’s room again and leaves us a...

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I like Kaori. Her thought process is unique and interesting in how it's portrayed but I'm wondering if that's partly due to English being your second language. I like her sisterly relationship with Saki and her condition is definitely unique and interesting for a fic that is primarily about hooking ...

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Calling Iwanako for advice? Hisao, you have no damn sense of tact. The man is dumb as bricks and I refuse to let him be anything else. :lol: First off, there isn’t a doctor (or friend) in the world who would lead off with “She died,” unless they’re a sadist who hates the person they’re talking to. ...

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“What do you mean ‘she died’ !?” Fuuka all but screams at Rui and it’s taking everything I have to stop my heart from exploding on the spot. My blood ran ice cold when Rui messaged us via Rika’s phone and asked to meet us at the Shanghai. The few other patrons around us look over curiously but Rui h...

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Oddball wrote: ↑Mon Oct 30, 2023 9:53 am
Well, that's a wonderfully dark Halloween tale! Great work.

Thanks, Oddball! I'm glad folks have been enjoying it, despite the subject matter.

Oddball wrote: ↑Mon Oct 30, 2023 9:53 am
Although I'd remove "mind control" from your warnings as it gives away things too early.

That's a good shout, doneso

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I echo hdkv's statement, don't rush yourself and only release it when you're happy with it.

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