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by Sharp-O
Wed Apr 10, 2024 9:57 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Wordplay - (Akio x Hisao one-shot/pilot)
Replies: 2
Views: 210

Wordplay - (Akio x Hisao one-shot/pilot)

“How do you get a squirrel to like you?” I deploy my opening line as I sit down at my desk, my favourite way to start the day. I wait for an answer but it seems like Hanako’s either not biting today or she’s genuinely stumped. I flash her a smile and deliver the punchline. “Act like a nut.” There’s ...
by Sharp-O
Sat Mar 02, 2024 9:09 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flutter - Level Thirty Five: Chip Damage [1/3/24]
Replies: 315
Views: 177886

Re: Flutter - Level Thirty Five: Chip Damage [1/3/24]

Peorth wrote: Fri Mar 01, 2024 11:31 pm

typo.

Fixed! Good looking out!

hdkv wrote: Sat Mar 02, 2024 2:50 am

Looks like both Saki and Rika have a bunch of troubles to take, huh.

It certainly does! :lol:

by Sharp-O
Sat Mar 02, 2024 8:51 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Intentions
Replies: 17
Views: 1573

Re: Intentions

Well hot damn! What a way to kick off a multi-parter! Excellent and, dare I say, impactful first post! Looking forward to what else you have in store, Seannie!

by Sharp-O
Fri Mar 01, 2024 6:22 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flutter - Level Thirty Five: Chip Damage [1/3/24]
Replies: 315
Views: 177886

Re: Flutter - Level Thirty Five: Chip Damage [1/3/24]

“Is this one of those times when I should see the other girl?” I ask with a wince as Saki makes her way towards me. I knew she was in a fight but that looks sore as hell. Her silent, glum expression lightens as she enters my personal space and throws her arms around my neck. Oh. I guess we’re huggin...
by Sharp-O
Fri Mar 01, 2024 10:54 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Dream Within a Dream (Natsume x Hisao) 2/29 Latest
Replies: 3
Views: 365

Re: A Dream Within a Dream (Natsume x Hisao) 2/29 Latest

A nice low-key start to a new route, as is the way! The only feedback I can really give is about what we've discussed before with adding commas before characters address each other by name at the end of sentences. For example: “Hey wait up , Nakai! We want to talk to you.” There's one real grammatic...
by Sharp-O
Thu Feb 22, 2024 11:21 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flutter - Level Thirty Five: Chip Damage [1/3/24]
Replies: 315
Views: 177886

Re: Flutter - Level Thirty Four: Still Alive [22/2/24]

“Here’s your new prescription, sweetheart. Make sure Ryo gets it.” Mom says, offering out the slip with all my new medication on it. I bet if Hisao and I compared meds now, we’d match way more… “Thanks, Mom! The Doc will be my first stop once I drop off my stuff.” I take the slip after slinging my b...
by Sharp-O
Thu Feb 22, 2024 9:43 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (New NSFW Art 2/22)
Replies: 1197
Views: 952951

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 11/12)

That's such an amazing piece, Euro. I love equana's style!

Totally understand having assets you intend to use but never get round to as well!

by Sharp-O
Tue Feb 20, 2024 8:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku: The Next Generation (COMPLETE!)
Replies: 88
Views: 169530

Re: Yamaku: The Next Generation (COMPLETE!)

As the previous holder of the "Sentient Typewriter" moniker, I'm more than happy to see another with such a passion for their stories like you, Guthrum. Congrats on completing this saga and I look forward to what you do next!

by Sharp-O
Fri Feb 02, 2024 10:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Atlantic City (Saki)
Replies: 4
Views: 1980

Re: Atlantic City (Saki)

A great example of a short-form story with some weight.

by Sharp-O
Mon Jan 22, 2024 12:56 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flutter Bonus Levels (One-Shots) - Directional Influence [22/1/24]
Replies: 33
Views: 34045

Re: Flutter Bonus Levels (One-Shots) - Directional Influence [22/1/24]

Having rumours spread about you is part of being the top bitch of a school, I came to terms with that, but having your classmates whisper and mutter and pass notes about something you actually did is something else entirely. It’s embarrassing. Not unwarranted but still embarrassing. Then there was t...
by Sharp-O
Mon Jan 15, 2024 7:19 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flutter - Level Thirty Five: Chip Damage [1/3/24]
Replies: 315
Views: 177886

Re: Flutter - Level Thirty Three: 1-Up [7/1/24]

hdkv wrote: Sun Jan 07, 2024 6:06 pm

Giving her arrhythmia is too much irony lol.

After learning about the side-effects, it was too perfect, I just had to! Especially if it meant I could mirror Rika's own words back at her. :lol:

by Sharp-O
Sat Jan 13, 2024 12:06 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Running Away To You (A Post Lilly-Neutral Story) (Updated 1/1/24)
Replies: 52
Views: 55366

Re: Running Away To You (A Post Lilly-Neutral Story) (Updated 1/1/24)

One of the better Hisao x Akira fics I've read and a very compelling read overall. I'll admit that I find the relationship core of the story to be the most engaging for me but overall a very well written story!

by Sharp-O
Sun Jan 07, 2024 5:28 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flutter - Level Thirty Five: Chip Damage [1/3/24]
Replies: 315
Views: 177886

Flutter - Level Thirty Three: 1-Up [7/1/24]

Bright. Voices. Mom? Fuuka? “…Guess the way to your heart is through your stomach, then!” My Mom laughs and Fuuka chuckles in that way she does when she’s hiding something… My eyes adjust and I try to call out. “ MmmUp .” “Huh? Did that…” “I think…” “I’m up…” I manage though my throat is dry as bon...
by Sharp-O
Fri Jan 05, 2024 5:30 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "A Matter of Memory" 05/01/24
Replies: 376
Views: 216014

Re: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "A Matter of Memory" 05/01/24

You! You played me! ...and I liked it. And given that no one raised a suspicion about the stories for a week — you both did really good job replicating each other's style. Making it this good is a property of very good writers — which you both are. Thanks for these stories, don't hesitate to play w...