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You write Hisao very convincingly and his dynamic with Molly continues to be engaging and fascinating. The rest of the cast are pretty well-realised too and I did like the drama in the last chapte; very realistic. Fantastic work, Piro, keep it up!

Sharp-O

One thing strikes me like a punch in the face, a bludgeoning sense of déjà vu. Sitting surrounded by my friends - all talking to me, or about me, or around me - while I sit here feeling numb. Dissociating from people while I replay another event revolving around my heart.

It’s like I haven’t ...

Sharp-O

Though Fuuka's head may have been somewhat in the gutter, I can't blame her for jumping to conclusions. Even rash, poorly thought out conclusions. Rika's attitude being so starkly disconnected from Hisao's would throw just about anyone off (Hell, even just Rika's 180 from the night before is bit ...

Sharp-O

Main glossary updated with the amazing theme song created by our very own Feurox! <3

Sharp-O

“Hisao?” I call out as he heads towards the main doors, just as I wheel around the corner from the common room into the main hall. “Hey! Hisao! Where the hell have you been?”

My quick chase is halted in its tracks by the coldest look I’ve ever seen on Hisao’s face. Bloodshot eyes filled with hurt ...

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Thanks so much for all your comments! This is another one of those instances like Ventriloquy where I thought of a concept and wrote it in a day!

In this case, I discovered the term 'optography' which is the belief that the eye retains the last image it sees before death and I immediately thought ...

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“Destroy it and burn the negatives.” The voluble, robust voice of moral reason who I agree with.

“No, she should keep it.” The honeyed, adenoidal voice of artistic integrity who I also agree with.

“It’s disrespectful. It’s… It’s just wrong.” The first voice responds.

“What it is is art. It’s not ...

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Have to admit, I never predicted this particular conflux of characters spinning out of my prompt but that was a super-cute story, Gray, and it definitely warmed my heart. Thank you very much and Merry Chrimbo!

Sharp-O

Munchenhausen wrote: Tue Dec 10, 2024 12:41 pm
AYYYYYY SHARPIE! Long time no chat!
Nice to see the forum still has some decorum How's it going, lad?

I'm doing alright, came back to finish up Flutter and ended up writing (and creating) way more than I intended

Sharp-O

Welcome back, Munch! Good to see you!

Sharp-O

Would be interested in more peaks into this part of the world! (Though, I still need to read monomyth, funny enough. I know the shorts stand on their own, but it's still something I want to do.)

Me, neglecting one of the main characters for nearly ten years: "I should write about Lilly. Or ...

Sharp-O

Another brilliant chapter! It's super interesting to have Mai and Hisao have to directly confront their past at the same time as their own mortality. Should make for an interesting dynamic and I can imagine the extended cast making things more awkward once they find out the connection.

Sharp-O

SilentM wrote: Fri Nov 22, 2024 12:01 am
Also was that a Missing Stars reference snuck in there by any chance?

Sharp-O

“Damn it…” My head tilts in my sister’s direction, ears pointed to where her annoyed grunts and muttered curses originate - a few feet behind me. I slide my suitcase to the side of the hallway, out of the immediate path of my sister as she rushes past with her own case. We’ve only just gotten back ...

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Seconding what Stealthy said; it's a really neat idea for a story and definitely cool to see it used for a criminally underused class member.

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