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Seconding what Stealthy said; it's a really neat idea for a story and definitely cool to see it used for a criminally underused class member.

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Thanks, dude! It's always fun to revisit these two occasionally.

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Frankyo wrote: ↑Sat Nov 09, 2024 12:47 am
almost thought this was the actual ending, where she found out that she was in a dating sim all along

I thought it would be funny to give the gamer girl a Doki Doki-esque ending for the fun of it but don't worry, this is entirely non-canon to the rest of Flutter.

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“Is that… Everything…?” Miki huffed, dropping her end of the couch onto the floor. She lifts her backwards baseball cap to wipe her brow with her bandaged arm. As she stood upright and her back popped in so many satisfying ways, I knew I had to do it too. Placing my hands on my lower back, I tilt my ...

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I'm with SilentM, kinda threw me that Hisao is seemingly in his second year at Yamaku after entering in his third. If this is going to be a daily thing then I tip my hat in advance because that's quite ambitious!

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“Do you still trust me?” I turn to face my boyfriend, who I’ve confessed my love to, and plead for him to look at me. He stands with his hands on his waist, looking sheepishly at the floor. I go to push his shoulders, hoping that the jolt will knock him loose of whatever stupid thought he’s having. S ...

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This is brilliant! Lots of fun interactions, a nice wind-up to potential drama, and some really expressive conversations with great descriptive language. I like this almost mastermind-esque take on Molly.

Fantastic work, Piro! Looking forward to mote!

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The prologue was good but this chapter was juicy! Mai's experience already feels lived in and the reader can infer tons about her time there already. Putting her in Grey-Hair/Shin's spot it a great shout for an alternate student.

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Short and effective. That's a brilliant little vignette.

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Good job on this chapter, Razor!

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Hisao stands in the doorway; brandishing a letter he shouldn’t have, like it’s the secret item for a quest. It was never meant to be in his hands, not like this anyway. It was meant to be a failsafe. I’m kind of at a loss for words as I look between the folded paper and his face; a wicked sense of dé ...

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A very cool set-up to the story and you did a great job characterising Mai and Iwanako.

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I don’t sleep. Not well, anyway. Not in any way that you could consider restful. I should be on cloud nine, lying in bed with my girlfriend after a wonderful date and a night of love-making. But that’s not what happened, is it? Even now things feel off. I can’t tell if it’s the guilt of fainting duri ...

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Peorth wrote: ↑Wed Sep 18, 2024 12:35 pm
Also, thanks for the words. Damn cliffhangers.

Thanks for the correction! We're doing Monomyth throwbacks with these cliffhangers!

StealthyWolf wrote: ↑Wed Sep 18, 2024 5:27 pm
There was no way this particular Chekov's gun wasn't going to be fired...

"Yeehaw, chucklefucks." - TheRussianBadger

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My limbs creak as I stretch across my bed, twisting my back until I can’t twist anymore. I let out a satisfied moan as my body goes limp. My eyes flutter open, reaching for a body that isn’t there. I swear I had a boy here not too long ago… I sit up, clutching the duvet to my chest, peering into the ...

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