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- Mon Dec 31, 2018 7:31 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 11: Wake Up (24/07/2018)
- Replies: 48
- Views: 35370
Re: Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 12: Surprise (31/12/2018)
Previous The end of class arrives, and I start to head to my room. I walk across the grounds of Yamaku, and up ahead I see a girl rush out of the main building and run towards the female’s dormitory. I think that was Hanako. I wonder what happened? I decide against following her and carry on t ...
- Mon Dec 31, 2018 7:27 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 11: Wake Up (24/07/2018)
- Replies: 48
- Views: 35370
Re: Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 12: Surprise (31/12/2018)
A new chapter, just in time for the new year. The schedule is very sporadic due to having plans for other, non fanfiction stories and stuff happening in real life. I hope you enjoy this chapter. :) This one contains 7.7k words. Chapter 12: Surprise *** Ryuunosuke’s PoV *** After going back to my r ...
- Tue Oct 09, 2018 3:01 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: From Humble Beginnings (Hanako good end) Part:1 (Post Mirage Edit
- Replies: 6
- Views: 5045
Re: From Humble Beginnings (Hanako good end) Part:1 (Post Mirage Edit
It's fine. I'm sure quite a few native English speakers, such as my self, have issues with the English SPaG when writing.
- Thu Sep 20, 2018 11:55 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A Butterfly Dream - Iwanako/Hisao Inversion
- Replies: 51
- Views: 53845
Re: A Butterfly Dream - Iwanako/Hisao Inversion
There's one more possibility I'm including from my head-canon, compatible with your position. The location of Yamaku (which literally means 'mountain ward', or 'civic area on the mountain') is likely on the slope of Mount Aoba. That would mean that if you built part of the school against the hill ...
- Fri Sep 14, 2018 10:33 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 11: Wake Up (24/07/2018)
- Replies: 48
- Views: 35370
Re: Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 11: Wake Up (24/07/2018)
Ooo now that should be good. I also the Nurse stands out out as being an actual medical professional that works well with high school students and not just window dressing or one liners. Have a good one and I'll keep any eye out for updates. :D Long wait for a response cough . It is amazing what ...
- Thu Sep 13, 2018 3:42 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Unforeseen Consequences, Katawa Shoujo Forums Edition
- Replies: 50
- Views: 21711
Re: Unforeseen Consequences, Katawa Shoujo Forums Edition
We only get to see what you write down. It is possible that his Japanese is imperfect in your head, but if you want to get that across to your readers you have to put in some effort. And to get imperfect language across is hard enough if the text is written in the language they are supposed to be ...
- Thu Sep 06, 2018 11:45 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Unforeseen Consequences, Katawa Shoujo Forums Edition
- Replies: 50
- Views: 21711
Re: Unforeseen Consequences, Katawa Shoujo Forums Edition
- Sun Aug 26, 2018 10:07 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hesmiyu's Extras - Watcher In The Snow - 2018/08/26
- Replies: 7
- Views: 6554
Hesmiyu's Extras - The Watcher In The Snow
To be honest, I have no idea what inspired me to write this fic but it actually took longer to edit it than to write. This is set before the Last Time The Watcher In The Snow The snow beneath my feet rustles as I step through. It is quite a nice sound, crushing something and there being no ...
- Mon Aug 20, 2018 8:07 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 11: Wake Up (24/07/2018)
- Replies: 48
- Views: 35370
Re: Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 11: Wake Up (24/07/2018)
Great couple of chapters! I finally took the time to catch up on your story and I really love your characters and how easily they fit into the world of KS. I did notice two things in the last chapter. "I hear Masahiro’s voice on my left ask me if I’m all right. I look at him and see he has his hand ...
- Mon Jul 30, 2018 4:26 pm
- Forum: Fan Works
- Topic: Consolidated Calendar of Events
- Replies: 20
- Views: 41351
Re: Consolidated Calendar of Events
Looking up when Marine day would have been in 2007, it would have been the 23rd July, the third Monday of July which would put the 3-day weekend between 21st-23rd. On yours you have it the week prior. Is that due to the game? Everything I've looked at has pointed toward 16 July. What's your source ...
- Sat Jul 28, 2018 6:09 am
- Forum: Fan Works
- Topic: Consolidated Calendar of Events
- Replies: 20
- Views: 41351
Re: Consolidated Calendar of Events
Looking up when Marine day would have been in 2007, it would have been the 23rd July, the third Monday of July which would put the 3-day weekend between 21st-23rd. On yours you have it the week prior. Is that due to the game?
- Tue Jul 24, 2018 12:44 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 11: Wake Up (24/07/2018)
- Replies: 48
- Views: 35370
Re: Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 11: Wake Up- Part 3 (24/07/2018)
Previous Post *** Ryuunosuke’s PoV *** Running late seems to be my theme for the day, I blame my diary for that. First running late for swimming - which Akemi seemed to be concerned about until I managed to calm her - and now I am running a few minutes late for my homeroom. I am concerned that she i ...
- Tue Jul 24, 2018 12:41 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 11: Wake Up (24/07/2018)
- Replies: 48
- Views: 35370
Re: Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 11: Wake Up - Part 2 (24/07/2018)
Previous Post *** Ryuunosuke’s PoV *** The annoying tone of my alarm wakes me up, and I manage to turn it off with one swoop of my arm. I sit up and rub my eyes, feeling the suture scar around my bad eye as I do so. As I look around my room, my good eye is drawn to the time on the alarm clock. ...
- Tue Jul 24, 2018 12:39 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 11: Wake Up (24/07/2018)
- Replies: 48
- Views: 35370
Re: Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 11: Wake Up - Part 1 (18/07/2018)
Whats this? A new chapter after a year? :O As stated in my previous post, I had gotten distracted. What I hadn't stated what that my drive for the story had subsided due to lack of response. Here is chapter 11 with 11.9k words. ---- Chapter 11: Wake Up I enter my homeroom, my head now thankfully ...
- Sat Jul 14, 2018 10:08 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yuuko Pseudo-route: Can You Read Me?
- Replies: 14
- Views: 14520
Re: Yuuko Pseudo-route: Can You Read Me?
I came across this while I was thinking about odd pairings (I am trawling the forums to read all fics) and had noticed a lack of Yuuko ones. Keep up the good work.