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Biggest problem so far seem to be prepositions.

Thanks for the help! I think i fixed most of them.

It's a bit strange that she would get all those infos through the nurse and not a policeman... The police are researching the case and noone even came to talk to her?
Well,this may have a certain ...

Chapter 2

I wake up again to the white noise.

The snow is still there. That makes me wonder, what day is it? I look for a calendar, but there doesn't seem to be one in the room.

I open the door to the bathroom.

I enter, and I remember that I have to take a shower. Before that, I stand in front ...

Okay, well, it seems like you've got yourself an interesting idea, here. I'm interested, at least.

Thanks man! I'm glad to hear that.
1. "I" is always capitalised in English, even in the middle of a sentence.
2. Have a space after commas.
3. You don't have to have every new sentence on a ...

Mirage_GSM wrote: I hope it's not going to be a spy-thriller, since that takes a... special kind of talent to pull off in a KS setting.

For now,I can assure to you that it won´t be a spy thriller.

It would be interesting,anyway.

WARNING: HYPHEMA AHEAD

First of all, I would like to introduce myself.

куртка is the name, or Kurtka.
It means jacket in russian
I´m from Chile, and I always wanted to write a fan-fiction with an OC, but didn´t try until now.

Well, the thing is, English is not my native language and,most likely ...