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Please write a chapter where Hisao's dad somehow encounters Jiggoro, I think he's the only person I've ever seen in this universe that could win.

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So DID he escape from the hospital, or did Emi misinform Misha?
If the former then why?

And how come Molly doesn't recognize Hisao?

This confused the hell out of me until I realized it was a continuation of a story almost a year old. Still, post-deep-end is always interesting.

I intended that ...

Writings of a mad-man: Part 3
Part 1 - Part 2

This chapter came to me out of nowhere, I didn't really have anything planned when I started it but it turned into a nice little idea. I might continue, I might not. Either way, enjoy!

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And here I stand, at the gates that I had such a hard time ...

If I was doing Civil War, it'd be at Yamaku and would be a water gun fight between the boys and girls dorms :lol:

I think it's more that I want Mai, Takumi, Shin and Hisao to be a happy family together, but the from what we've seen so far it seems like Shin has chosen Iwanako over his buddies ...

I like Shin, seems like a cool dude, but it worries me that you mentioned "choosing sides"

“You’re going to be the death of me, Hisao Nakai.”

Flag number 1. :wink:

Couldn't find any errors on my read-through either, good job. I totally expected Hisao's first time seeing Rika naked would be one of those "Character walks into the room to find a naked person" type deals though, with ...

A whole year already? Man, time flies fast.

I'm here early! I get to point out errors!

that he may not even fell like eating or…

Feel

And there was only one... you're too good sharp

As always, you've got me hooked.

Dash9 wrote:Gotta get to work (already late, oops)

You better dash!

Will Hisao's heart be broken a second time? Find out next time on Flutter!

How so?

Italics doesn't really have a start or an end.

If you're writing multiple lines, it might be a little hard to differentiate where that person's speech ends.

And the next begins.


{But if you use something like this.}

{Then it's pretty easy to see at a glance.}

{And reads a little ...

I'd personally recommend some way for showing text written on a pad besides italics, but that could just be me. :lol:

Given what I’ve seen I can hardly believe that.

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...Over half of what you said was intelligible.

I think this block of text was meant to be italicized?

I was Lilly who ...

It's a good thing I still get free dentist appointments, you're giving my cavities left and right sharp.

I haven't been able to poke in and read for a while, and I come back to a blank piece, it's like my birthday.

I'm really liking it so far, I can totally see Shizune as a tomboy. Keep up the great work man, I'm looking forward to more from Lilly's side.

Texaboose wrote:someone remind me, was that Swampie's "Developments"?

You flatter me, developments is dewlars.

Not sure if that has the bitchy Meiko though, been a while since I read it.

:evil: youve leaved that on the fourms, and my fanfix is more gooder than that[/i!!!!!!!!1 :lol: :lol: :lol:

My early fics are still up and just... god, it just hurts to read. Oh god why did I write phantom pains like that.

I can see why somebody would bring up that point, but why would you ...