Hey I'm new here and am working on a story I guess. Any constructive criticism would be great!!!
WALL OF TEXT
MFW when WoT: :roll:
The main problem is that paragraphs help establish flow and break up the text into units of expression. If the whole thing is one run-on paragraph, it's like a ...
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- Wed Apr 22, 2015 3:46 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Epilogue. (Emi Good Ending) *WIP*
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- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Epilogue. (Emi Good Ending) *WIP*
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Epilogue. (Emi Good Ending) *WIP*
Hey I'm new here and am working on a story I guess. Any constructive criticism would be great!!
As I arose from my bed I slapped my alarm clock with a lazy arm. It was time for one last morning run with Emi today I remembered as I jumped out of bed and started to put on my gym clothes. Today is ...
As I arose from my bed I slapped my alarm clock with a lazy arm. It was time for one last morning run with Emi today I remembered as I jumped out of bed and started to put on my gym clothes. Today is ...