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by Razoredge
Sun Feb 04, 2024 1:55 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Secret Santa 2023 - Story collection
Replies: 27
Views: 38009

Re: Secret Santa 2023 - Story collection

Victim: ToothedYew006 Prompt: Hisao and Lilly getting married See notes at the end of the story. Good things come to those who wait I toss and turn in bed, I can’t sleep. This afternoon, I’ll be a married guy to one of the most beautiful girls I’ve ever seen. Sometimes I wonder why she chose me. We...
by Razoredge
Sat Dec 02, 2023 5:45 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Arrhythmia & Coffein
Replies: 4
Views: 7465

Re: Arrhythmia & Coffein

Saw a video earlier about the case of a woman with arrhythmia who died after drinking a (heavily) caffeinated lemonade and the legal ramifications. I don't know either the drink or the company, and I can't judge whether or not they did enough to warn about the content of their drink, but imo if the...
by Razoredge
Thu Feb 02, 2023 7:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Switching Dynamics - A Ritsu Pseudo-Route (Properly)
Replies: 47
Views: 31534

Re: Switching Dynamics - A Ritsu Pseudo-Route (Properly)

With Kaori, I understand how attached she is to that guitar, it reminds me a lot of a fanfic I'm also writing where the MC is also attached to that instrument, being the last solid memory of someone she lost. Hopefully you can soften her up a bit in the long run and accept Hisao as a worthy success...
by Razoredge
Tue Dec 27, 2022 3:51 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Secret Santa 2021 - Story collection
Replies: 24
Views: 28364

Re: Secret Santa 2021 - Story collection

First of all, don't blame yourself, I'm still happy you did something for me. And to be fair, you surprised me. I expected, with such a prompt, to read something Hanako-related, but I was surprised, in the good way, to see that I was wrong, and for that, thank you. I'm quite difficult when it comes ...
by Razoredge
Wed Dec 21, 2022 11:28 am
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: I post things here occassionally.
Replies: 123
Views: 95897

Re: I post things here occassionally.

apackofbadgers wrote: Wed Dec 14, 2022 7:18 am Not dead yet.
The mp4 is a shitpost.
God, this one is pretty neat, I love it.
by Razoredge
Mon Aug 08, 2022 2:05 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Lullaby of an open heart - A Saki pseudo-route
Replies: 7
Views: 7592

Re: Lullaby of an open heart - A Saki pseudo-route

Thank you very much, I'm glad you like it. And I hope you'll like the future chapters too. But I'll try my best to keep this content enjoyable as much as I can.
by Razoredge
Tue Jul 26, 2022 9:48 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Lullaby of an open heart - A Saki pseudo-route
Replies: 7
Views: 7592

Re: Lullaby of an open heart - A Saki pseudo-route - I-3 added 07/26/2022

Quiet The peaceful atmosphere of the classroom is a relief. It’s quite early, and I’m the first person in class; most students are probably still in the cafeteria or even in the dorms. My previous classmates never understood how I could enjoy being alone in a silent classroom that early in the morn...
by Razoredge
Wed Jun 22, 2022 11:31 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Asoko Desu's one-shots and short pieces ( September 12 / 2023 - Shake, Shake, Shake )
Replies: 37
Views: 29639

Re: Infinitely More Than We Can Ask or Imagine — A short one-shot (complete)

Which leaves Lilly, Shizune, and Misha. As "suspects" for "the Other." My gut feeling is Shizune , because of any of the main paths even at her "good" outcome it's kinda implied they don't last. While I'd also mention her family name has a certain connotation to it. Ov...
by Razoredge
Fri May 06, 2022 1:06 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (New NSFW Art 2/22)
Replies: 1194
Views: 834327

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Double Update 3/14)

It took me some time, but I went to the end of this update. The only thing I can say is: Wow. Right in the feels. I must admit I thought, during the recital part, that Saki would fuck everything up because of this wrong note. As a musician myself, I know how it feels when you hit a wrong note, and y...
by Razoredge
Thu Apr 21, 2022 5:17 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rin Epilogue: The Long Road (Updated 16/6/2023)
Replies: 64
Views: 47453

Re: Rin Epilogue: The Long Road (Updated 15/4/2022)

Well, well, well. Considering what I said in my previous message, it's not a surprise at all. To be fair, Hisao asking Hanako to live with him and Rin, considering their relationship in your story, feels natural. It doesn't feel forced at all, but it may be your writing, I don't know. The addition o...
by Razoredge
Fri Mar 25, 2022 11:00 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Beyond The Haze : A Lilly pseudo-route - II-13 added 27-02-2022
Replies: 58
Views: 44296

Re: Beyond The Haze : A Lilly pseudo-route - 26-03-2022 update

I hope you guys like the content I posted until recently. I'm currently rewriting some of the earliers chapters (did that for the first three chapters for now, and edited the posts on the forum related to these chapters) because I thought I don't like this old writing anymore, I tried to improve the...
by Razoredge
Tue Mar 01, 2022 6:04 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 808770

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)

What a shame I didn't read this piece before. When I saw Akira-Yuuko, I was like "That's something I want to see more, some all-girls action is always a good thing.". And I was right. Yuuko is at her Yuukoest, clumsy AF, and that's how I like her. A smart character, but with a clumsy side ...
by Razoredge
Tue Mar 01, 2022 5:52 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Game, Set, Match. An Epilogue.
Replies: 10
Views: 6500

Re: Game, Set, Match. An Epilogue.

I'm kinda picky when it comes to Shizune, because I don't like this character, in general. Here, she's less formal than usual, more relaxed, talking about her emotions. Which is great, I like this kind of take on characters that are supposed to control everything, being a bit tyrannic sometimes. A r...
by Razoredge
Sat Feb 26, 2022 9:03 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Beyond The Haze : A Lilly pseudo-route - II-13 added 27-02-2022
Replies: 58
Views: 44296

Re: Beyond The Haze : A Lilly pseudo-route - II-13 added 27-02-2022

History huddle For the first time this year, I wake up in a state of panic for something other than a storm. This afternoon, I’ll have to start tutoring the first-year students with history. For someone who fears responsibilities like me, it requires a lot of efforts to do such a thing. But I promi...
by Razoredge
Sun Jan 23, 2022 2:52 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Secret Santa 2021 - Story collection
Replies: 24
Views: 28364

Re: Secret Santa 2021 - Story collection

Here's my piece for our local space enjoyer, Crafty. Merry (very belated) Christmas and happy (very belated) New Year, Crafty. Prompt: A story that takes place (at least partially) at Yamaku which includes someone in love, someone in trouble, someone who knows more than they want to. White christmas...