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by Razoredge
Tue Apr 01, 2025 3:14 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Switching Dynamics - A Ritsu Pseudo-Route (Properly)
Replies: 51
Views: 65195

Re: Switching Dynamics - A Ritsu Pseudo-Route (Properly)

A great addition to the route, brother. I like where this is going, but I also dread it, since how Ritsu reacts when she has to do what Mao asked her to do. This won't be a walk in the park, but it'll add drama. Mao's characterization as a sociopath that doesn't care about bothering anyone just to ...
by Razoredge
Thu Jan 02, 2025 8:24 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Crafty's One-Shots (Jan 1st, 2025: Roots in the Frost)
Replies: 159
Views: 204638

Re: Crafty's One-Shots (Jan 1st, 2025: Roots in the Frost)

Weeeeeeeeell... What could I say? I wasn't expecting any of that. And I'm pleasantly surprised, to say the least. Saki's family being loaded enough to get a full butler working for them for more than 20 years, and yet living in a nuclear bunker was the last thing I thought about, but you got me ...
by Razoredge
Sat Dec 28, 2024 10:01 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Optography" 27/12/24
Replies: 404
Views: 304297

Re: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Optography" 27/12/24

I was not ready for it, Sharpy, not at all. And yet, it was a brilliant piece. A piece that made me want to punch one of the characters, that should say how well-written it was. I was not expecting this, and I'm 'pleasantly' surprised. Very well done, brother.

by Razoredge
Sun Dec 22, 2024 5:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Secret Santa 2024 - Story collection
Replies: 16
Views: 7166

Re: Secret Santa 2024 - Story collection

Victim: ToothedYew006
Prompt: Hisao becomes Santa Claus due to a mysterious turn of events. But he's slowly loosing his Santa magic. Since he didn't see the small prints, he didn't know what is happening. Now, he's looking for a certain someone to restaure his magic.

Cold war, slow revival

In ...
by Razoredge
Thu Dec 12, 2024 7:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Lullaby of an open heart - A Saki pseudo-route - I-4 added 12/13/2024
Replies: 8
Views: 14425

Re: Lullaby of an open heart - A Saki pseudo-route

Nailed it... or not

The sound of my alarm clock wakes me up with a start. Damn, I’m still not used to that shrill noise, and I don’t think I’ll be used to it anytime soon. Looking at my army of pills, I sigh; depending on these things for the rest of my life isn’t the most appealing idea.

I ...
by Razoredge
Thu Nov 21, 2024 7:53 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Optography" 27/12/24
Replies: 404
Views: 304297

Re: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Anamnesis" 21/11/24

I'm somehow not even surprised to see what her first action when she comes back home is that. As if it was expected, or even mandatory. Yet another great addition to your collection, Sharpy, it's a great piece, a bit short for my own liking, but who am I to judge, it's not about the quantity, but ...
by Razoredge
Mon Oct 14, 2024 6:07 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flutter - Level Thirty Nine: Rage Quit [13/10/24]
Replies: 338
Views: 270688

Re: Flutter - Level Thirty Nine: Rage Quit [13/10/24]

In today's episode of Hisao being an absolute dumbass, without any social skill and whose only knowledge is books: Hisao thinks he's a know-it-all and decides to patronize a girl that has more experience of being disabled than him, and then, he wonders why things turn wrong.

Don't get me wrong, I ...
by Razoredge
Mon Oct 14, 2024 4:32 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Beyond The Haze : A Lilly pseudo-route - II-14 added 13-10-2024
Replies: 62
Views: 82059

Re: Beyond The Haze : A Lilly pseudo-route - II-14 added 13-10-2024

Thank you Sharpy (for your job correcting the chapter by the way) and thanks SilentM too :)

For your answer, describing her as a troublemaker was more of a Lullaby of an Open Heart thing, but I wanted to add it in this story too. Maybe doing it that late in the story wasn't the best choice, I admit.

by Razoredge
Sun Oct 13, 2024 11:30 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Beyond The Haze : A Lilly pseudo-route - II-14 added 13-10-2024
Replies: 62
Views: 82059

Re: Beyond The Haze : A Lilly pseudo-route - II-14 added 13-10-2024

Twist of tongues

Some days seem to last longer than others without apparent reason and this was certainly one of them. Maybe it was because of the math, science, and English lessons but I feel more exhausted than usual, and I can’t skip my English private tuition with Lilly. It was really nice of ...
by Razoredge
Sat Aug 24, 2024 3:10 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Completed)
Replies: 1263
Views: 1309988

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Completed)

I refuse to believe this is the end, but I came to terms with it. I wasn't there when you launched it, but I'm confident enough to say that this route was an important part of my life for the past years. A really important one. To this day, this is hands down the best one I've read, and I want to ...
by Razoredge
Sun May 12, 2024 6:50 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Legacy of Vladimir Hodakov [last update: 08.01.2025 — Foreplay]
Replies: 13
Views: 7859

Re: The Legacy of Vladimir Hodakov [last update: 11.05.2024 — Last Night on Earth]

He was right. It hurts in all the right ways. Well executed, Vlad, and thank you for sharing this with us.

Rest well, brother. You are and you will be missed dearly. Thank you, so much, for everything. I'll never forget what I've promised you. And, if there is another side, we'll see you there ...
by Razoredge
Sun Feb 04, 2024 1:55 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Secret Santa 2023 - Story collection
Replies: 30
Views: 86181

Re: Secret Santa 2023 - Story collection

Victim: ToothedYew006

Prompt: Hisao and Lilly getting married


See notes at the end of the story.

Good things come to those who wait

I toss and turn in bed, I can’t sleep. This afternoon, I’ll be a married guy to one of the most beautiful girls I’ve ever seen. Sometimes I wonder why she ...
by Razoredge
Sat Dec 02, 2023 5:45 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Arrhythmia & Coffein
Replies: 4
Views: 25559

Re: Arrhythmia & Coffein


Saw a video earlier about the case of a woman with arrhythmia who died after drinking a (heavily) caffeinated lemonade and the legal ramifications.

I don't know either the drink or the company, and I can't judge whether or not they did enough to warn about the content of their drink, but imo if ...
by Razoredge
Thu Feb 02, 2023 7:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Switching Dynamics - A Ritsu Pseudo-Route (Properly)
Replies: 51
Views: 65195

Re: Switching Dynamics - A Ritsu Pseudo-Route (Properly)


With Kaori, I understand how attached she is to that guitar, it reminds me a lot of a fanfic I'm also writing where the MC is also attached to that instrument, being the last solid memory of someone she lost. Hopefully you can soften her up a bit in the long run and accept Hisao as a worthy ...
by Razoredge
Tue Dec 27, 2022 3:51 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Secret Santa 2021 - Story collection
Replies: 24
Views: 55524

Re: Secret Santa 2021 - Story collection

First of all, don't blame yourself, I'm still happy you did something for me. And to be fair, you surprised me. I expected, with such a prompt, to read something Hanako-related, but I was surprised, in the good way, to see that I was wrong, and for that, thank you. I'm quite difficult when it comes ...