Search found 206 matches

by Razoredge
Mon Oct 14, 2024 6:07 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flutter - Level Thirty Nine: Rage Quit [13/10/24]
Replies: 336
Views: 234913

Re: Flutter - Level Thirty Nine: Rage Quit [13/10/24]

In today's episode of Hisao being an absolute dumbass, without any social skill and whose only knowledge is books: Hisao thinks he's a know-it-all and decides to patronize a girl that has more experience of being disabled than him, and then, he wonders why things turn wrong. Don't get me wrong, I'm ...
by Razoredge
Mon Oct 14, 2024 4:32 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Beyond The Haze : A Lilly pseudo-route - II-14 added 13-10-2024
Replies: 62
Views: 69424

Re: Beyond The Haze : A Lilly pseudo-route - II-14 added 13-10-2024

Thank you Sharpy (for your job correcting the chapter by the way) and thanks SilentM too :)

For your answer, describing her as a troublemaker was more of a Lullaby of an Open Heart thing, but I wanted to add it in this story too. Maybe doing it that late in the story wasn't the best choice, I admit.

by Razoredge
Sun Oct 13, 2024 11:30 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Beyond The Haze : A Lilly pseudo-route - II-14 added 13-10-2024
Replies: 62
Views: 69424

Re: Beyond The Haze : A Lilly pseudo-route - II-14 added 13-10-2024

Twist of tongues Some days seem to last longer than others without apparent reason and this was certainly one of them. Maybe it was because of the math, science, and English lessons but I feel more exhausted than usual, and I can’t skip my English private tuition with Lilly. It was really nice of h ...
by Razoredge
Sat Aug 24, 2024 3:10 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Completed)
Replies: 1250
Views: 1226605

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Completed)

I refuse to believe this is the end, but I came to terms with it. I wasn't there when you launched it, but I'm confident enough to say that this route was an important part of my life for the past years. A really important one. To this day, this is hands down the best one I've read, and I want to ...
by Razoredge
Sun May 12, 2024 6:50 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Legacy of Vladimir Hodakov [last update: 11.05.2024 — Last Night on Earth]
Replies: 12
Views: 2558

Re: The Legacy of Vladimir Hodakov [last update: 11.05.2024 — Last Night on Earth]

He was right. It hurts in all the right ways. Well executed, Vlad, and thank you for sharing this with us. Rest well, brother. You are and you will be missed dearly. Thank you, so much, for everything. I'll never forget what I've promised you. And, if there is another side, we'll see you there ...
by Razoredge
Sun Feb 04, 2024 1:55 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Secret Santa 2023 - Story collection
Replies: 30
Views: 80396

Re: Secret Santa 2023 - Story collection

Victim: ToothedYew006 Prompt: Hisao and Lilly getting married See notes at the end of the story. Good things come to those who wait I toss and turn in bed, I can’t sleep. This afternoon, I’ll be a married guy to one of the most beautiful girls I’ve ever seen. Sometimes I wonder why she chose me. We ...
by Razoredge
Sat Dec 02, 2023 5:45 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Arrhythmia & Coffein
Replies: 4
Views: 21801

Re: Arrhythmia & Coffein

Saw a video earlier about the case of a woman with arrhythmia who died after drinking a (heavily) caffeinated lemonade and the legal ramifications. I don't know either the drink or the company, and I can't judge whether or not they did enough to warn about the content of their drink, but imo if the ...
by Razoredge
Thu Feb 02, 2023 7:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Switching Dynamics - A Ritsu Pseudo-Route (Properly)
Replies: 49
Views: 48887

Re: Switching Dynamics - A Ritsu Pseudo-Route (Properly)

With Kaori, I understand how attached she is to that guitar, it reminds me a lot of a fanfic I'm also writing where the MC is also attached to that instrument, being the last solid memory of someone she lost. Hopefully you can soften her up a bit in the long run and accept Hisao as a worthy ...
by Razoredge
Tue Dec 27, 2022 3:51 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Secret Santa 2021 - Story collection
Replies: 24
Views: 52190

Re: Secret Santa 2021 - Story collection

First of all, don't blame yourself, I'm still happy you did something for me. And to be fair, you surprised me. I expected, with such a prompt, to read something Hanako-related, but I was surprised, in the good way, to see that I was wrong, and for that, thank you. I'm quite difficult when it comes ...
by Razoredge
Wed Dec 21, 2022 11:28 am
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: I post things here occassionally.
Replies: 123
Views: 150217

Re: I post things here occassionally.

apackofbadgers wrote: Wed Dec 14, 2022 7:18 am Not dead yet.
The mp4 is a shitpost.
God, this one is pretty neat, I love it.
by Razoredge
Mon Aug 08, 2022 2:05 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Lullaby of an open heart - A Saki pseudo-route
Replies: 7
Views: 10492

Re: Lullaby of an open heart - A Saki pseudo-route

Thank you very much, I'm glad you like it. And I hope you'll like the future chapters too. But I'll try my best to keep this content enjoyable as much as I can.
by Razoredge
Tue Jul 26, 2022 9:48 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Lullaby of an open heart - A Saki pseudo-route
Replies: 7
Views: 10492

Re: Lullaby of an open heart - A Saki pseudo-route - I-3 added 07/26/2022

Quiet The peaceful atmosphere of the classroom is a relief. It’s quite early, and I’m the first person in class; most students are probably still in the cafeteria or even in the dorms. My previous classmates never understood how I could enjoy being alone in a silent classroom that early in the mor ...
by Razoredge
Wed Jun 22, 2022 11:31 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Asoko Desu's one-shots and short pieces ( September 12 / 2023 - Shake, Shake, Shake )
Replies: 37
Views: 107176

Re: Infinitely More Than We Can Ask or Imagine — A short one-shot (complete)

Which leaves Lilly, Shizune, and Misha. As "suspects" for "the Other." My gut feeling is Shizune , because of any of the main paths even at her "good" outcome it's kinda implied they don't last. While I'd also mention her family name has a certain connotation to it. Overall though I very much ...
by Razoredge
Fri May 06, 2022 1:06 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Completed)
Replies: 1250
Views: 1226605

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Double Update 3/14)

It took me some time, but I went to the end of this update. The only thing I can say is: Wow. Right in the feels. I must admit I thought, during the recital part, that Saki would fuck everything up because of this wrong note. As a musician myself, I know how it feels when you hit a wrong note, and ...
by Razoredge
Thu Apr 21, 2022 5:17 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rin Epilogue: The Long Road (Updated 27/7/2024)
Replies: 68
Views: 92980

Re: Rin Epilogue: The Long Road (Updated 15/4/2022)

Well, well, well. Considering what I said in my previous message, it's not a surprise at all. To be fair, Hisao asking Hanako to live with him and Rin, considering their relationship in your story, feels natural. It doesn't feel forced at all, but it may be your writing, I don't know. The addition ...