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In fact, I use these words a lot since the first day I've learned English, I really like these words, so, in my mind, it was obvious to use these. That being said, thanks for the advice, I'll try, for the next chapters, to cut off these "insignificant" scenes to add more plot and more thin...

Well, I have to say, this is really a beautiful piece. That's fucking sad, but beautiful as the same time. You managed to make me sad, which is a hard thing, to be honest.

I really liked how you have written this letter, such as the rest of this piece, sad and beautiful.
You did it well, really.

Entrance I wake up one hour and a half before the first lesson of the morning because I have to start swimming again. Fortunately, I didn't lose my habits too much, get a habit back is a pain in the ass. Outside, the sun has barely risen, everything is quiet while the vast majority of students is s...

Well that was a weird one, not a thing I expected at the first glance.
But I have to say, it was, for me a nice surprise.
This scene between the best trio ever made was super cute, in my point of view.

Reading Lap's work, is, as always, a good thing.
Man, you should have more kudos on your work.

That was a nice reading for me from the start to the end. You, sir, have a good writing, I really like it. Such as Notice, I didn't get the Miki thing too, but you have your own vision about that, and that's a thing I like too. Different visions are good, especially on VN characters. I wish I could ...

Class support Thankfully, we had only three tests last week. This week is different in every way because we have some work to do for the festival. Therefore, we will have half of our afternoons free, which is useful to work on our class projects. Our homeroom teacher tells us what we will do this y...

Once again, this is a nice update. Now, I'm intrigued, about what will happens in the future about the surgery and all the stuff like that, how the characters will manage to bear that kind of event, and so on. You, Euro, achieve to hook me up to your story, and I have to say, I wait with pleasure fo...

It's a nice attempt, I have to say. However, I'm agree with Nuclear, I don't think that Hisao would write the first paragraph like that, but if it's your vision, it's totally fine, differents visions are good. The others paragraphs are good, that's a fact. It's a nice little thing, except for, in my...

Try not converted Spending time with my parents made me happy, and thanks to this, I can start the week in the right way. We have an entire week free before starting the festival's preparations. I really like to help my classmates during this preparatory process, as much as I can. Sometimes, when I...

I really like this last piece, especially how you dealt with Misha. Great job, sincerely.

For this chapter, here's a little piece of art I got from Rtil, I have to say I really like this piece. Thank you, buddy, in the event that you're potentially reading something like this. https://i61.servimg.com/u/f61/17/47/20/86/tanaba10.png Warm reunion The last week was pretty boring. At least, I...

I don't let anyone told me what to do with my stories, don't worry

But I take reviews seriously to improve myself, that's what I wanted to say.

I can't believe I do such mistakes once again. Thanks for pointing this out. For what you said after, in fact, I have a plot written for every scene, and my plot is written until the end of act III for now. I don't want to justify what I have done, but, you see, I don't write a scene after someone t...

I approve what Feurox said. Being so far, this story is good, even with minor problems.
I really like to read it.