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The sad ending is nice. I have no problems with that. The alternate crazy ending was fun but I think it would have worked just fine without the axe murder. It was already nuts enough without that part. The main story … well, that's certainly a different take on Naomi than I'm used to seeing. She c ...

Wow, what an amazing plot twist there! That sudden shift completely caught me by surprise. Pretty sad twist, of course, but intriguing for sure. I did not really care much for Ikuno before reading this story and... I still don't really care that much for her, but she interests me a bit now. I ...

Aw, now I feel guilty that I haven't read more of After the Dream... I'll definitely read through everything at some point. I've always loved Kenji and it's great to read about his future, especially with such great writing. Keep up the amazing work!

Is this supposed to be a parody? Because it started out quite decently but by this point it's completely off the roll... I wanted this story to be quite serious at first... but then it really got out of control as I wrote more and I decided "Eh, oh well." You know, at the time, it honestly did seem ...

Thanks for the feedback! I'm happy to see people are enjoying the story! Perhaps it would have been better to post the alt ending later so people could criticize the main story first but, eh, I'm still overjoyed at the reception. I will say that that was pretty funny :lol: My thought process: Hmm, I ...

azumeow wrote:I...just....there are no words. I cannot find words.

No, I found one: WAT.

Uh, I guess I'll take that as positive feedback. Thanks for your reception, I really do appreciate it! (not being sarcastic, I swear. I appreciate any reception, even WAT)

And now for some crazy alternate endings. I was actually considering including these in the story proper but they don't fit in at all. But, hey, I've already wrote them so why not? Just a fair warning; Suzu's rather out of character. Yeah, a background character can't really be OOC, but she's still ...

Romance between two awesome characters, Natsume and Naomi. I actually did not intend for this to be a romance at first... but I just couldn't resist when I thought of some cute moments. And some not so cute moments too. I really enjoyed writing those moments but there are some moments I feel... less ...

I'm not much of a literary critic like these guys but I have to say I really did love this story. Perhaps I'm a bit biased since I always did like Molly, Suzu, and Taro (screw Hisao though) but, in any case, it was very well-written and interesting. I didn't see many glaringly obvious typos or ...