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Oh also, I thought I'd share some advice on chapter length. I often used to wonder what was an "appropriate" length for a chapter myself, particularly since I was prone to pumping out chapters between 10,000 and 20,000 words on a regular basis. I think the short answer to the question of &...

One thing I've noticed, particularly popular with people who haven't written much, is an over reliance on first person narrative for their works. I think as a general rule of thumb, while first person narrative is great for providing an intimate connection with a character, that also works against y...

Also, jeez , that was fast :shock: ! damn, those girls in the diner/fast-food place/thing really made me wanna punch them. Also, "weaponized pout"... Genius :lol: I'm going to try and hit another chapter in the next 3 days. I already know what to write, it's just a matter of doing it. Tha...

*Nods in approval* This story has my interest. I shall be waiting. One criticism (although this might just be personal preference) is that I seem to recall Akira mentioning that Lilly wasn't cut out for work in business. Is that a thing, or am I confusing cannon with Sisterhood cannon :? ? I'm not ...

What's Developments about? Doesn't sound like something I've read yet, is it long and angsty? :D Yes, it's long. And angsty. And it is an amazing read with obsessive attention to interesting detail. I went and read it on your guys recommendation(?? I guess recommendation??) I thought it was pretty ...

5 acts and we're barely into act 1? Oh lawdy. I'm sensing another Developments. Not that that is a bad thing in any way, shape or form. Calling it now, Hanako's daughter is Hisao's. Because that will just make things more horrible and painful for everybody involved. Hahah, I'm not that evil. Also, ...

Truth be told, judging by your introductory post and the fact that your linking to fanfiction.net, I was expecting nothing more than yet another poorly written post-Hanako end with terrible grammar and script-like syntax. Needless to say, I was pleasantly surprised. You managed to set the scene ver...

Someone told me that I should post this over here since it's more active than where I normally post, at least for fan fiction. Anyway, the story takes place 10 years post Hanako's bad ending. I'll copy the blurb here from Fanfiction.net "In a fit of anger and confusion Hanako screamed at Hisao ...