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Cheers man, missed that in my proof read. I'll swoop in and edit it now.

Yeah no, that's my bad, for not making it clear that they hadn't been in touch.

None the less though, any feedback is good. If my writing makes something unclear I need to change it. So still thanks.

Hey man, I used the skype call rather than the phone as although it'd do nothing more for Lilly, Akira would be in a similar state as her sister and would certainly like to see her. I also imagined that Hanako and Hisao would like to see Akira and vice versa. Thanks for the feedback. People can't ...

Hey there, so I thought I'd try my hand at a one-shot and given the date who better to be a subject than the wonderful Lilly Satou. I hope you enjoy. And do please let me know how to improve, feedback fuels my work ...