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Leaty wrote:FFS. If somebody wanted to see more MTtB badly enough that they'd just rip me off without credit and try to bullshit their way to success, easier to just throw money at me to finish it.

We could do that?!

Eurobeatjester wrote:Oooof. I thought parts of this looked familiar, but couldn't put my finger on why.

For me, it was “Why am I thinking of MTtB...?”

I almost wanna consider we should maybe check some of the other fanfics that sound familiar and see if there is anything else taken from them.

Peorth wrote:Yes, Hisao. Not dying is alaways a plus.

Speak for yourself *joke*

So uh...no one commenting on the awkward thing towards the end? Who would've thought I'd be more comfortable with a lemon scene than two people playing with themselves.... I...did not find that terribly awkward, honestly. Shit's hot, yo. Honestly I'm kind of in the middle of both of you. It's a ...

So uh...no one commenting on the awkward thing towards the end?

Who would've thought I'd be more comfortable with a lemon scene than two people playing with themselves....

Pretty sneaky of Kenji

I'm gonna be honest, here, Mirage, that would be my reaction if a girl confessed to me. Wait, what? Uh...huh. Sweet. That might just be because I'm a sarcastic git, though My reaction would be the same also, but only because I never expect anyone to feel that way about me from my self-esteem in ...

Mirage_GSM wrote:

where the crowded halls are finally beginning to spread out

I think it's not the hallways spreading out... Would be strange otherwise

Takes place at Hogwarts now, didn't ya know?

So glad you're moving this one to here. Only reason why I bothered checking the KS FF.net was just for this.

You also misspelled "sits" in the seventh paragraph.

Probably partied the hardest in this story than any other.

InSaiyan wrote:

Zerebos wrote:I'm right there with you, Hisao. InSaiyan is a cruel cruel man.

Hahaha! Don't hate the player, hate the game.

That's something I've really gotten used to accepting...wait, are we talking about in the story or real life?

I'm enjoying your work so far, between this and the Naomi route on FanFiction. Oh hey, thanks for checking me out on FF. Yeah I was thinking about putting that on this forum but to be completely honest I'm not sure how I feel about the quality of it myself yet :? The route, as a whole, is great. I ...

Overall, I enjoyed these (still working on Lilly's epilogue though). I'm enjoying your work so far, between this and the Naomi route on FanFiction.

An excellent start here. I loved the heart-to-heart talk between them and can't pick between what I found funnier: Hisao's joking around about not wanting to clear off his desk for Shizune's little bucket list or how you ended this.