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- Fri Dec 12, 2014 7:14 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Word of Mouth (On Hold)
- Replies: 36
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Re: Word of Mouth
So, is Kazuya only missing four finger, or is there any other reasons that he's in Yamaku? And also, will Amaya actually be talking in any of the chapters to come, (not far away chapters, but closer one.) or will she just gesture everything for a while? Other than that, that was a good chapter.
- Tue Dec 09, 2014 11:18 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Word of Mouth (On Hold)
- Replies: 36
- Views: 13545
Re: Word of Mouth
Then I cant wait for the parts to come!Xilirite wrote:Ooooh, Hurk gets real fun as the story goes along
- Tue Dec 09, 2014 10:23 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Word of Mouth (On Hold)
- Replies: 36
- Views: 13545
Re: Word of Mouth
I never did like those pictures at the end of the hallways. They're weird. And Hurk looks like a good character from what you've put of him in this part.
- Mon Dec 08, 2014 11:20 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Word of Mouth (On Hold)
- Replies: 36
- Views: 13545
Re: Word of Mouth
"I'm not interesting to look at, with my plain clothing and the dirty blond mess of hair God dropped on my head and then forgot about." I've read that sentence over about 6 times, but I still don't understand it. Also, It's a bit jumbled. Maybe you should tab when you create a new paragraph, or ...