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by Xilirite
Fri Jul 24, 2015 8:42 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: KS Writing Club: Cherry Blossoms (Updated 07/24/15)
Replies: 47
Views: 23023

Re: KS Writing Club: Cherry Blossoms (Updated 07/15/15)

Alright, sorry about the long delays recently -- here's chapter 8. Hope you enjoy! Caged Heart (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-JeJjWeYQuc) As much faith as I have in Lilly’s insight, I can’t shake the feeling that this is something I need to take care of on my own. Besides, even if Lilly knows mor...
by Xilirite
Thu Jul 16, 2015 1:16 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Damage -- A KS Inspired Novel (Updated 16/07/15)
Replies: 11
Views: 5124

Re: Damage -- A KS Inspired Novel (Formerly Word of Mouth)

Thanks for all the positive feedback guys! We're just now reaching the first chapters that I made significant changes to, mostly in terms of tone. Hope you enjoy! Hellooo, Nurse On my way out of the dorms, I try to remember what Hurk had told me to do. He said something about going to the medical de...
by Xilirite
Mon Jul 13, 2015 5:54 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Damage -- A KS Inspired Novel (Updated 16/07/15)
Replies: 11
Views: 5124

Re: Damage -- A KS Inspired Novel (Formerly Word of Mouth)

I submitted the first 2 acts (50%) of the book. I got some really high praise and a lot of extremely helpful advice that helped me make the thing even better -- the google doc I have this saved to lists him as a special thank you due to how much I appreciated his contribution. Love that guy to bits....
by Xilirite
Mon Jul 13, 2015 1:28 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Damage -- A KS Inspired Novel (Updated 16/07/15)
Replies: 11
Views: 5124

Re: Damage -- A KS Inspired Novel (Update 13/07/15)

Don't mind Ben, he's the one leftover from the fan fiction stage of writing that I wanted to keep. Act 1 Recursion Life, Second Verse Two days later, I step out of the car to get my first look at Stephen Farfler High. It looks a lot fancier than any place I'd ever gone before. The iron gate, as fore...
by Xilirite
Sun Jul 12, 2015 9:10 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Damage -- A KS Inspired Novel (Updated 16/07/15)
Replies: 11
Views: 5124

Re: Damage -- A KS Inspired Novel (Formerly Word of Mouth)

I did, in fact, get a 100% on the assignment :D Most of the changes that I've made aren't going to be easy to pick out, seeing as the last time it was on here was half a year ago. However, certain things were made more subtle, a couple extra chapters were added, and two of the major characters have ...
by Xilirite
Fri Jul 10, 2015 8:31 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Damage -- A KS Inspired Novel (Updated 16/07/15)
Replies: 11
Views: 5124

Damage -- A KS Inspired Novel (Updated 16/07/15)

Sooooo before we start, there's a little bit of history behind this. A year ago I started working on a fan fiction titled Word of Mouth. It was posted to the forums and it's possible one or two of you remember it. The story was very loosely tied to Katawa Shoujo, taking place in the same school but ...
by Xilirite
Sat Jun 20, 2015 9:03 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: KS Writing Club: Cherry Blossoms (Updated 07/24/15)
Replies: 47
Views: 23023

Re: KS Writing Club: Cherry Blossoms

I have to apologize for my portrayal of Hisao -- the short story of why he's so bad here is that I haven't adapted quickly enough from my previous writing project. In my current project, Damage , my character is cynical, volatile, and emotionally strong, and I've written nothing but Damage for at le...
by Xilirite
Sat Jun 20, 2015 10:08 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: KS Writing Club: Cherry Blossoms (Updated 07/24/15)
Replies: 47
Views: 23023

Re: KS Writing Club: Cherry Blossoms

The choice that we went with from the previous chapter is Choice A: Try to get Hanako to talk about it. I hope you all enjoy my continuation of the story OneManArmy77 started. Cherry Blossoms (Part 2) By Xilirite Caged Heart (http://www.infinitelooper.com/?v=-JeJjWeYQuc&p=n) I sigh in frustratio...
by Xilirite
Fri Dec 12, 2014 11:07 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Word of Mouth (On Hold)
Replies: 36
Views: 12920

Re: Word of Mouth (On Hold)

I'll still update in chunks rather than all at once, but I won't be doing so until April, when it's finished.
by Xilirite
Fri Dec 12, 2014 6:59 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Word of Mouth (On Hold)
Replies: 36
Views: 12920

Re: Word of Mouth

Hey guys, a bit of news -- Some things have come up, and to make a long story short, I'll be removing the story bits from this thread at the end of the month and won't be putting them back up until the end of March. I'd talk about why, but it would be kind of silly. When April comes around, the enti...
by Xilirite
Fri Dec 12, 2014 1:56 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Word of Mouth (On Hold)
Replies: 36
Views: 12920

Re: Word of Mouth

Technically, you can enroll in the school regardless of whether or not you have a physical disability, which is how Hurk and Shiina got in. Either way, I describe the exact reason she enrolled at Yamaku specifically later on -- she's only just been introduced, remember.
by Xilirite
Fri Dec 12, 2014 8:14 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Word of Mouth (On Hold)
Replies: 36
Views: 12920

Re: Word of Mouth

Removed until further notice.
by Xilirite
Fri Dec 12, 2014 8:06 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Word of Mouth (On Hold)
Replies: 36
Views: 12920

Re: Word of Mouth

Okay, yeah, upon rereading the relevant parts, you're right. And he doesn't actually refer to it as his car, so maybe somebody thought he knew how to drive and handed him the keys. Maybe once he had the keys, that made him the de facto owner of the car; hence the one who decided on the driver? Bing...