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Shizune sat by herself, as usual. She watched the underclassmen walking by, seeing several of them give her uncomfortable looks. She wanted to go talk to them, maybe give them some guidance or just say hi. It was impossible. Most of them couldn't understand her, and the few who could, knew her and ...

I prefer to use proper English, which says to use third person perspective in creative writing. In any case, this has nothing to do with the story.

Made a few minor revisions, as for some reason, I was thinking the festival was on Saturday instead of Sunday. Now that's fixed.

Because I've had English writing classes. Pretty much every teacher I've ever had said don't use First Person, unless you're writing a play.

I don't write first-person. It's bad form (though understandable considering the source material).

Will fix the typo.

Added another scene.

Thanks!

Apparently the story is dry and boring. I'll save everyone the pain of reading it.