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- Tue Nov 11, 2014 6:11 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated 10/2/15]
- Replies: 150
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Re: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated: 11/
I'm enjoying this story quite a bit. Fleshing out characters we're not as familiar with, giving new perspectives on main characters that we'd all like to think we know everything about already, it's quite refreshing. I'd like to point out that I'm definitely in the same boat as Oscar Wildecat on ho...
- Sun Nov 09, 2014 2:32 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated 10/2/15]
- Replies: 150
- Views: 103004
Re: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated: 11/
Sorry for the delay. I haven't seen Brady since friday and I'd prefer to show him what I've written before I post it.
- Fri Nov 07, 2014 9:58 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated 10/2/15]
- Replies: 150
- Views: 103004
Re: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated: 11/
The problem I’m having with this route and the other pseudo-route that has been started is that they’re both really enjoyable, but I can see myself having difficulty keeping track of what happened in which story. Was this the story where Hisao would have bad-ended by throwing Shizune and Misha out ...
- Fri Nov 07, 2014 5:19 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated 10/2/15]
- Replies: 150
- Views: 103004
Re: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated: 11/
One of the things that stands out about this story so far is how you've given us a chance to really to get to know the Hisao Nakai of this story -- who he is, what separates him from the Hisaos that ended up on one of the cannon routes, and why we should care about him. It kinda plays into what Eur...
- Mon Nov 03, 2014 6:00 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated 10/2/15]
- Replies: 150
- Views: 103004
Re: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated: 11/
This is getting really good. I especially like that you don't seem to focus too much on Hisao and the main girl (in this case Aoi) but instead introduce a few secondary characters (Keiko and Haruhiko - plus maybe Shizune, Misha and Emi). Always a good sign if authors go the extra mile to do that. H...
- Sun Nov 02, 2014 11:43 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated 10/2/15]
- Replies: 150
- Views: 103004
Re: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated: 11/
For some reason I had forgotten about Keiko. She seems...excitable so far. Also, it's nice to see Hisao make up with the girls, even if they won't have a major impact on the story. Really liked the talk he had with Shizune and Misha, as short as it was. Also also, "unlike yesterday my stomach ...
- Thu Oct 30, 2014 4:12 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated 10/2/15]
- Replies: 150
- Views: 103004
Re: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route
Eh, It's not anything major.Silentcook wrote: But you're doing it. And repeatedly, at that. You should take your own advice and not react to audience involvement - or at least, not to such a degree.
Also welcome to the forums, I spose.
Also thanks.
- Wed Oct 29, 2014 10:36 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated 10/2/15]
- Replies: 150
- Views: 103004
Re: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route
That's interesting. I wondered about that odd shade of blue, then decided she had a specific kind of blindness coupled with protanomalous colour sensitivity—this is a disorder in which people can't discriminate reds (sometimes, they see them as greys or even black) but can see blue fine. Good chara...
- Wed Oct 29, 2014 10:27 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated 10/2/15]
- Replies: 150
- Views: 103004
Re: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route
Learning the Blues by Thetealeaf. OC name Tsukino Ayane. Along with her brother, Tsukino Arashi. Also, I'm enjoying it. Not bad. I......share many feelings with Hisao in his nebulous, friendless state. You have described them well. Thanks. Luckily I managed to find a partner I synergize incredibly ...
- Wed Oct 29, 2014 9:59 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated 10/2/15]
- Replies: 150
- Views: 103004
Re: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route
I thought the red ribbon fit better with her hair.brythain wrote: No metallic grey-blue ribbon?
Also, I've seen that 'Tsukino' surname around here recently...
Also... where else is 'Tsukino'? C'mon! It literally means 'moon-field', I couldn't find a better one.
- Wed Oct 29, 2014 9:39 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated 10/2/15]
- Replies: 150
- Views: 103004
Re: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route
EDIT: Scratch that. We're going by Aoi's appearance in the final game.