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- Fri Aug 22, 2014 12:57 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Living With a Blindside... (Update: Chapter 8+Ambiance!!!)
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Re: Living With a Blindside...
Okay, not bad for a first story. Quite a few problems with tenses and Homophones. I won't list them all here, but I suggest you find a proofreader/editor. Several people around here will be able to help you if you ask nicely. "Sarizon" is not really a Japanese name, and it feels strange t...
- Fri Aug 22, 2014 7:36 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Living With a Blindside... (Update: Chapter 8+Ambiance!!!)
- Replies: 35
- Views: 14772
Re: Living With a Blindside...
Wish I would've known that before I started lol, oh wellHelbereth wrote:Regardless of the VN's release date, all events in KS take place in 2007, not 2012, which is when 4LS started development.
I hope you guys don't mind me keeping it at 2012
- Fri Aug 22, 2014 7:23 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Living With a Blindside... (Update: Chapter 8+Ambiance!!!)
- Replies: 35
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Nurse Report #2
Nurse Report #2 http://i.imgur.com/Bi1l0Dtl.jpg *Yamaku Academy Nurse Report #2* June 9, 2014 I got to know the Patient a little bit more this week. Satoshi seems very respectful in many ways... Seems as though he was brought up in a good household when he was younger... I talked to him about his f...
- Fri Aug 22, 2014 7:08 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Living With a Blindside... (Update: Chapter 8+Ambiance!!!)
- Replies: 35
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Act 1 - Chapter 4
Chapter 4 - What Am I Good At? http://i.imgur.com/tRr8JWpl.jpg It's been almost a week since Akemi went on vacation with her family. Since she's been gone, I've felt pretty bored to be honest. I still have yet to make a "friend" and all I basically do is go to class and back to my room af...
- Fri Aug 22, 2014 5:17 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Living With a Blindside... (Update: Chapter 8+Ambiance!!!)
- Replies: 35
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Act 1 - Chapter 3
Chapter 3 - Sleep Is For Those With Empty Thoughts... http://i.imgur.com/P6JtyN6l.jpg I wasn't able to get a lot of sleep last night. Reason being, is that I couldn't take my mind off of that Akemi girl I met yesterday... For one, I've never been so open to talking to someone I didn't know, much le...
- Fri Aug 22, 2014 5:10 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Living With a Blindside... (Update: Chapter 8+Ambiance!!!)
- Replies: 35
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Nurse Report #1
Nurse Report #1 http://i.imgur.com/F7H9nfSl.jpg *Yamaku Academy Nurse Report* Name: Satoshi Fujino Age: 16 Height: 5'7 ft. Hair Color: Black Eye Color: Brown w/ left eye damage Disabilities: ADHD, Semi-Blindness, Burned skin on left side of face and neck Satoshi Fujino, born in Satte-Shi, Japan, wa...
- Fri Aug 22, 2014 5:04 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Living With a Blindside... (Update: Chapter 8+Ambiance!!!)
- Replies: 35
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Act 1 - Chapter 2
Chapter 2 - Humble Beginnings http://i.imgur.com/4VqiuMSl.jpg My alarm steadily woke me up early the next morning. I rubbed my opens to open and scan across my dorm room. "*Yawn* So it wasn't a dream, I'm actually here... I can already feel the day being better than the past 8 months or so... ...
- Fri Aug 22, 2014 4:59 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Living With a Blindside... (Update: Chapter 8+Ambiance!!!)
- Replies: 35
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Act 1 - Chapter 1
Chapter 1 - Starting Off Right http://i.imgur.com/ydl6OQtl.jpg As I began walking towards the front gate, I slowly felt smaller as the towering gates seemed to grow in size and stature with every step I took. I stopped just before entering, asking myself, "Is this really what I want? I either ...
- Fri Aug 22, 2014 4:54 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Living With a Blindside... (Update: Chapter 8+Ambiance!!!)
- Replies: 35
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Prologue
Prologue - Where to Start? http://i.imgur.com/7vbCX8xl.jpg It was September 22, 2013, and I was just about to turn 16 the next day... I was walking down the road with my friends, just like any other day and all I had on my mind is what I'm gonna get for my birthday the next day, and how me and my f...
- Fri Aug 22, 2014 4:52 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Living With a Blindside... (Update: Chapter 8+Ambiance!!!)
- Replies: 35
- Views: 14772
Living With a Blindside... (Update: Chapter 8+Ambiance!!!)
Hello everyone. For those of you who may not know, I have moved my fan work which is originally named, KS OC, "Sarizon Furoruso," over here to the fan fiction section with an "Actual" title now. To simply put, I am moving everything over from that forum over here to help clean up...